~* Mehreen Ki Pasand *~

[mehreen]

:hii:kehte hai surah rang muhabat ki nashani hai
pyaar karne waalu ki chaah bhari khani hai
aao hansi khushi waqt ko ghuzare hum tum
k chaar din ki to ye zindagaani hai

[mehreen]

hansi ki khanak

kaha teri hansi ki khanak jese ,
aasman pe utri hue dhanak jese,
ajheeb dhoop chau ka imtijaaz hai ,
chehre pe ghusa kabhi haya ki chamak jese

[mehreen]

saazish

gila tha k rona hum se zabt nahi hota :donno::donno:
dekh aansu ki saazish us waqt ruke jab une behna tha .

[Mr.Khan]

Re: muhabat ki nashani

nice

[mehreen]

baarish e gham

dusru ke dill ko khelona samjne wale:think:
dekh aaj tere dill se dill ko behla gaya koe :think:
in muhabat bhare jazbaat ki parwa kiye bagher :think:
baarish e gham main tujhe nehlaa gayaa koe :think: dekh

[Mr.Khan]

Re: saazish

buhat umda

[Mr.Khan]

Re: hansi ki khanak

buhat umda

[mehreen]

Re: saazish

jazak allah shukriya

[Mr.Khan]

Re: baarish e gham

gr8

[mehreen]

Re: muhabat ki nashani

thanku

[mehreen]

Re: hansi ki khanak

thanx

[mehreen]

shaeri karna jurm nikhla

shaeri karna mera jurm nikhla :rose ehle duniya ka yahan zulm nikla :roseapne pathru se sangsaar kiya :rose k tum ne kisi se pyaar kiya :rose ghali ghali us muhabat ki tash heer ki :rose apne haatu haraab meri taqdeer ki

[S.Athar]

Re: shaeri karna jurm nikhla

اسلام علیکم
سب سے پہلے تو پیغام فیملی کا حصہ بننے پر مبارکباد اور خوش آمدید
اچھی سوچ ہے اچھی تحریرہے
اُمید ہے آئیندہ بھی شئیر وئیر کا سلسلہ جاری رہے گا
اللہ جی آپ کو شاد رکھیں آباد رکھیں آمین

[mehreen]

Re: shaeri karna jurm nikhla

salam shukiriya g inshallah meri koshish jaari rahe gi .poetry pasand karne ka shukiriya . aalah g hum sab ko apni hifz o aman main rakhain ameen

[Nadia khan]

Re: shaeri karna jurm nikhla

baut hi umda