Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

ek nazm aiHbaab kee nazr

kiya baat hai, buhat umda paishkash hai :rose

[*Hala*]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

@ Ajaz bhai........... buht khubsurat shairy hai hamesh ki tarah.. khush rahien

@ SAZ bhai.......... itni kaam waqat mein ... itni achi poetry lekhanaa... kamal ki bat hoti hai... lekhty rahi ...

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

ایک میری جانب سے بھی حاضر ہے :)۔

Heart touching entry

[Ismail Ajaz]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

*ASK*;1350518][CENTER][LEFT][COLOR=Green]my entry...........:hii:
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bhaai bohot Khoob kya baat hai aap kee

daad qubool farmaa'iye aur saath saath mujh naacheez par nazar e karam farmaane kaa bhee shukriyah qubool farmaa'iye

mamnoon

[Ismail Ajaz]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

saraah;

saraah jee iss KhoobSoorat taiHreer ke liye meree jaanib se daad qubool farmaa'iye

[Ismail Ajaz]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

*Hala*;

hala jee

dil ko chhoo lene waalee yeh taiHreer bohot kuchh sameTe huwe apne paRhne waaloN ko apne elaawah kuchh aur naheeN sochne detee

bohot Khoob dheroN daad aap kee nazr

aur meree pazeeraa'ee ke liye mamnoon hooN

[Ismail Ajaz]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

S.A.Z;

masha Allah bohot Khoob janaab SAZ SaaHeb

bohot umdah hai daad qubool farmaa'iye,mujh par nazar e karam farmaane kaa beHad shukriyah

[Ismail Ajaz]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

Mr.Khan;1350633]kiya baat hai, buhat umda paishkash hai :rose

Khan SaaHeb Khush rahiye aabaad rahiye ramzaan kee mubaarakbaad aur salaam arz e Khidmat hai
duaa'oN meN yaad rakhiye ,pazeeraa'ee kaa beHad shukriyah

[Ismail Ajaz]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

ek Ghazal baarish se juRee aap tamaam aiHbaab kee Khidmat meN pesh hai

[S.Athar]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

اسلام علیکم ۔
تمام ممبران کا بہت بہت مشکور اور ممنون ہوں کہ انہوں نے ان الٹے سیدھے لفظوں کو شرف قبولیت بخشا۔
"ہالہ جی"۔"خان بھائی" اسمعیل اعجاز صاحب" آپ تمام مہربانوں کا بہت بہت شکریہ۔
اعجاز صاحب آپ کی یہ دوسری اینٹری پتہ نہیں اُصول کے خلاف ہے یا نہیں اور یہ ووٹنگ میں رہے گی یا نہیں لیکن مجھے اس کا یہ شعر بہت اچھا لگا ہے ۔
؂ایک میں اور میری یادیں اور دل تنہا میرا
دل کی دھڑکن میرے دل کے درد سارے سہہ گئی۔
اللہ جی تمام احباب کو شاد رکھیں آباد رکھیں آمین۔

[life.]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

Barish.......

Barish!
Tu jab band kawaron aur dilon per dastak deti hai
Sari baaten keh janey ko dil karta hai...
Terey sath hi beh janey ko dil karta hai!!!!

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

ek Ghazal baarish se juRee aap tamaam aiHbaab kee Khidmat meN pesh hai

Ismail bhai, aaap ki 2nd ghazal bhi buhat umda hai, magar competition ke rules ke mutabiq aap sirf 1 entry share kar sakte hen

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

Barish.......

Barish!
Tu jab band kawaron aur dilon per dastak deti hai
Sari baaten keh janey ko dil karta hai...
Terey sath hi beh janey ko dil karta hai!!!!

khubsorat entry

[Nadia khan]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

Walikum Assalam
bahut khoobsorat competion hai
sab ki entry bahut hi zabardast hain

[Nadia khan]

Re: Barish ~ Poetry ~ Competition ~ Aug ~ 2010

~*~Kal halki halki barish thi~*~



Kal halki halki barish thi
Kal sard hawa ka raqs bhi tha

Kal phool bhi nikhray nikhray thay
Kal un pe aap ka aks bhi tha

Kal badal kalay gehray thay
Kal chand pay lakhon pahray thay

Kuch tukray aap ki yaad kay
Bari dair say dil main thehray thay

Kal yaadain uljhi uljhi thin
Aur kal tak yeh na suljhi thin

Kal yaad bohut tum aye thay
KAL YAAD BOHUT TUM AYE THAY