my 1st ghazal 4 check

muzhir

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my 1st ghazal 4 check

7 April 2010, 20:05

ye mumkin bi nahi hai kay wo chor day mujy-may to darya hun ,takdeer kahin mor day mujaymanind e aina hun,mai tera hi aks hun-jab khud say wehshat hu tjy,to tor day mujy
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Mr.Khan

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7 April 2010, 20:14

Re: my 1st ghazal 4 check

Ye aap ka apna shair hai?
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muzhir

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9 April 2010, 07:20

Re: my 1st ghazal 4 check

g han ye mera apna shair hai
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