~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

[Mr.Khan]

Assalaam Alaikum Ahl-e-Bazm :salam:


Umeed hai ke aap sub kheriyat se hon ge :)


March ke month ke competition ke saath hazir hen.



~* Neend Poetry Competition *~



Aap sub se Neend ke topic per entries matloob hen.


Umeed karta hon ke pichlay competitions ki tarah is competition


me bhi aap sub bharpoor hissa len ge :)

Rules:

:) Har participant sirf ek ghazal share kar sakta hai.

:) Pehle se share ki gaii entry repeat nahi kiya jayega.

:) Edited entry ko qabool nahi kiya jaye ga.

:) Competition me hissa lene ki aakhri tareekh 25th March 2010 hai.

[Nadia khan]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

Walikum Assalam wr wb
bahut hi acha competition hai neend poetry:lol

[ASK Afridi]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

ok ji

[ASK Afridi]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

Qabool kijiye.......:sk:

Tujhe dekhay bina mujhe neend nahi aati
Tujhe sunay bina mujhe chain nahi aata

Main aik aag hoon jo pani ki pyaasi hai
Main aik jism hoon jo dil ka pyaasa hai
Tujhe bhoolna na'mumkin se na'mumkin hai
Tujh se judai main soch bhi nahi sakta hoon
Tujhe paana meri tammana hai
Tujhe khoo'denay ka darr behad hai
Main kerta hoon tum se pyar itna
ke ik nazar mein sab keh dalta hoon
Tujhe dekh ke aik sukoon sa aata hai
Tujhe se juda honay ka darr har waqt laga rehta hai
Na janay kyon main tujhe ko chahtaan hoon is kadar
Ke ik baar tujhe mein khoo jana chahtaan hoon
Tujhe takleef mein dekha na jaii
Meray ashqoon se pani beh jai

Tujhe dekhay bina mujhe neend nahi aati
Tujhe sunay bina mujhe chain nahi aata

[savera shah]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

　
Tehri tehri see tabiyat main rawaani aayee
Aaj phir yaad mohabbat ki kahaani aayee

Aaj phir neend ko ankhoon say bichaRtay dekha
Aaj phir yaad koi choo'ut puraani aayee

Mudatton baad chala unn pay humara jadooo
Mudatton baad humain baat banani aayee

Mudatton baad pashayman huwa darya hum per
Mudatton baad humain Piyaaas chupaani aayee

Mudatton baad khuli wusa'at-e-sehra hum per
Mudatton baad humain Khaak uRaaani aayee

Mudatton baad muyaasir huwa MAA ka aanchal
Mudatton baad humain neend suhaani aayee

Itni asaani say milti nahin funn ki doulaat
Dhal gayi umr tou ghazloon pay jawaani aayee

[naz]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

wo saath ho tu neend mai kaise khalal pare.....

ye soch kar ki terii jabii.n par na bal pa.De
bas duur hii se dekh liyaa aur chal pa.De

dil me.n phir ik kasak-sii uThii muddato.n ke baad
ik umr ke ruke hue aa.Nsuu nikal pa.De

siine me.n beqaraar hai.n murdaa muhabbate.n
mumkin hai ye charaaG kabhii Khud hii jal pa.De

ai dil tujhe badalatii hu_ii rut se kyaa milaa
paudho.n me.n phuul aur daraKhto.n me.n phal pa.De

ab kis ke intazaar me.n jaage.n tamaam shab
vo saath ho to neend me.n kaise Khalal pa.De

`Shehzad` dil ko zabt kaa yaaraa nahii.n rahaa
nikalaa jo maahataab samandar uchhal pa.De

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

:shyy:

[ASK Afridi]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

:shyy:

:thmbup:

[Nadia khan]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

:shyy:

very nice dear

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

My Entry

[Nadia khan]

Re: ~* Neend Poetry Competition ~ March 2010

My Entry

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very nice :rose

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

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very nice jee