Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

[tauseeftariq]

Yeh meri Nai nazam hai..
App logon nain meri nazam "abhi tum ko bekhrana hai" pasand ke bhut bhut
shukriya
apni ek new nazam post ker rehaa hoon
app ke comments bhut ihaam hain mery liye..
zarror batin ke kasi lagi yeh nazam...
Topic last nazam key saath kuch contiue say lagy shid app ko ..:phool:

[Shaim]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

Again Buhat khoobsorat poem Bhai!
Waiting 4 more........!!!:)

Wasse apki poem ka character ik masoom c afsaanwi lerki lagti hai is it correct?:cc: .......... Me ko aisa laga hai.....mayb aisa na ho per it is just my imagination!:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

yeh aap ki apni poetry hay ?? agar aapni hay to is ko aainda se Main Shair to Nahi main post kejye ga aur agar aap ki nahi hay to Nazms ghazals wagaira aap Bazm-e-Shairi main post kejye ga

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

Again Buhat khoobsorat poem Bhai!
Waiting 4 more........!!!:)

Wasse apki poem ka character ik masoom c afsaanwi lerki lagti hai is it correct?:cc: .......... Me ko aisa laga hai.....mayb aisa na ho per it is just my imagination!:)

hahaha ur right sister .. akhir app samjh hi gain nain ...
yes she is.......... nazam pasand kernin ka bhut bhut shukria........
ek aur hai nazam jo kuch din main post karoon ga

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

yeh aap ki apni poetry hay ?? agar aapni hay to is ko aainda se Main Shair to Nahi main post kejye ga aur agar aap ki nahi hay to Nazms ghazals wagaira aap Bazm-e-Shairi main post kejye ga

yeh meri apni nazam hai .. bhi
aur agher us ko main shair tu main nahin main move karin
tu plez phir bhi as ko ehsaas muhbat main bhi rehin dein
kiyon ke muhbaat ke ihsaas hai app ko shir bantaa hai ..hahaha:phool:

[Shaim]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

hahaha ur right sister .. akhir app samjh hi gain nain ...
yes she is.......... nazam pasand kernin ka bhut bhut shukria........
ek aur hai nazam jo kuch din main post karoon ga

Dekha me ko pata sahee chala:lpop: :donno:
shukerya k liye np.com!:)
KHUSH RAHIYYE!

Waiting 4 next!

[shahbaznk]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

yeh meri apni nazam hai .. bhi
aur agher us ko main shair tu main nahin main move karin
tu plez phir bhi as ko ehsaas muhbat main bhi rehin dein
kiyon ke muhbaat ke ihsaas hai app ko shir bantaa hai ..hahaha:phool:

Yeh sub mohabt ki nishaanian hain..... keep it up....

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

Dekha me ko pata sahee chala:lpop: :donno:
shukerya k liye np.com!:)
KHUSH RAHIYYE!

Waiting 4 next!

behnon ke duain haun tu bhi khus hi rahty hain ..
next poem ready hai per .. abhi post nahin ker rehaa .. ek do din
zaraa members purani post ko dekh lin
and whai is np.com ??
kiya yeh no problem.com hai ya kuch aur :cc:

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

Yeh sub mohabt ki nishaanian hain..... keep it up....

thanks ..i will try .....

[Shaim]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

behnon ke duain haun tu bhi khus hi rahty hain ..
next poem ready hai per .. abhi post nahin ker rehaa .. ek do din
zaraa members purani post ko dekh lin
and whai is np.com ??
kiya yeh no problem.com hai ya kuch aur :cc:

Hmmm ok.....:)
ji np.com mera dot com hai or iska matlab yahi hota hai:khi: per u ko kis ne bataya bhai?

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

Hmmm ok.....:)
ji np.com mera dot com hai or iska matlab yahi hota hai:khi: per u ko kis ne bataya bhai?

kabhi kabhi bhiyon ke zahanat ko bhi man liya karin
kisi nain batya nahin khud hi samjh giya thaa..

[Shaim]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

kabhi kabhi bhiyon ke zahanat ko bhi man liya karin
kisi nain batya nahin khud hi samjh giya thaa..

bhaiyon ki bat man'na matlab haar man'na:khi:
is liye pocha tha coz me haar nahi manti na:lpop: :blush:

[Aania]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

nice

[*Rida*]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

V nice keep sharing such nice poems

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Tumhain Muhabbat Ho gi Hai..

bhaiyon ki bat man'na matlab haar man'na:khi:
is liye pocha tha coz me haar nahi manti na:lpop: :blush:

hahah kiya baat hai app ke bhenaa

arz kiya hai

Jeet main Miltaa nahin adhaa bhi
Jo maza miltaa hai in matoon main ..

:phool: