~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

[Nadia khan]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

very nice shering

[haseebahmad]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

sard mausam ka mazaaj kitna alag sa hay
taveel raat main intazaar kitna alag sa hay

dhund bani naqab, aur chupa lia sitaron ko
unki tanhaai ka ab ihsas kitna alag sa hay

chaand be hoga tanha, dagar say atka hua
uskay sabar ka imtahaan, kitna alag sa hay

sunni hoi kahani ka, taqaaza wo baar baar
anjaam phir say bhoojna kitna alag sa hay

hotaiy hoye tanha, kerna mehsoos kissi ko
jazbaat ka haseen faraib kitna alag sa hay

khud he say karna sawaal, daina jawab be
phir zid aur takraar kerna kitna alag sa hay

HASEEB



"Muhabbat Sirf Otthay Kriyo,
Jitthay
Pyar Nibhany Da Dastoor Hovay

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

Lovely sharing Haseeb :rose

[Mr.Khan]

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My entry

[haseebahmad]

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Zabradaast,,

[Nadia khan]

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My entry

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bahut hi zabardast :rose

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

wahhh
aik say barh k aik sharing is baar
is baar waqi comptition thek thaak hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
lagta hay 4 ,5 winners hon gay
mujh samet :hehe:

maaz bhai multy choice rakhen gay na phir ?

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

wah g wah sab ki entries bhot fil hn.. best of luck...

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

wahhh
aik say barh k aik sharing is baar
is baar waqi comptition thek thaak hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
lagta hay 4 ,5 winners hon gay
mujh samet :hehe:

maaz bhai multy choice rakhen gay na phir ?

Jee han bilkul multi-choice voting hogi .....

Sub ne buhat hi umda entries share ki hen is liye kisi ek ko winner therana na insafi hogi :)

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

my entry
not a ghazal
jus ta loin
a shair



میرے بالوں میں فُر قت جَم گئ ہے
میرے ہونٹوں سے چُپ لِپٹی ہوئ ہے
تمہارے لَمس کی حد ّ ت نہیں تو
میری پَورَوں میں سردی تھم گئ ہے ۔۔!!!!

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

Jee han bilkul multi-choice voting hogi .....

Sub ne buhat hi umda entries share ki hen is liye kisi ek ko winner therana na insafi hogi :)

aur meray sath to bator e khas na insafi ho jaye gi agar is bar bhi mujhe vote na milay :fight:

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

aur meray sath to bator e khas na insafi ho jaye gi agar is bar bhi mujhe vote na milay :fight:

:lol

Nahi janab......members se hamesha achi umeed rakhin chahye :lol

[sajid mahmood]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

ratain lot ayee hain
phr say mazi k woh dareechay khulain gay
kabhi yoonhi kisi sard raat main achanak
suhani yadon ka koi hissa
kisi barf kay narm galay ki tarha
bin mosam sardi ki barish ki tarha
pichlay peher ki khamosh sarsarahat ki manind
apnay andar nami ka ehsas liay
yoonhi urti saba ki tarha
dil ko choo jay gaa

phr say dil muskuray gaa
anjanay say suroon main dhalay geet
suna'ay gaa
tuo us vakt, sunn lo jaana!!!
woh yadain, woh maazi bhi apna thaa..
or ye batain, ye haal bhi apna hay
tum kal mujh say
mere rag-e-jaan say
sabb say barh kay kareeb thay
aaj or bhi nazdeek ho!!!

mosam tuo hotay hi badalnay ko hain
ye sa'ay say, ye roz-o-shabb
hotay ghatnay barhanay ko hain
mohobbat sirf barhanay ko hay!!!


harr guzarta pal,
harr jaata lamha, ye keh raha hay
woh yadain, woh maazi bhi apna thaa..
or ye batain, ye haal bhi apna hay

[*Rida*]

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Ye Rahi mere entry

beautiful enrty

[*Rida*]

Re: ~* Sard Raat Poetry Competition ~ Dec 2009 *~

Raat bhar sard hawa chalti rahi
Raat bhar hamne alaav taapa
Maine maazi se kai khushk see shaakhien kaati
Tumne bhi gujre hue lamhon ke patte tode
Meine jebon se nikali sabhi sukhi nazme
Tumne bhi haathon se murjhaaye hue khat khole
Apnee in aankhon se meine kai maanze tode
Aur haathon se kai baasi lakeeren phenki
Tumne palkon pe nami sookh gayee thee, so gira di
Raat bhar jo bhi mila ugte badan par humko
Kaat ke daal diya jalte alaawon main use
Raat bhar phoonkon se har lau ko jagaye rakha
Aur do zismon ke indhan ko jalaye rakha
Raat bhar bujhte hue rishte ko taapa humne

buht khoob Ruba