Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

[Mr.Khan]

Assalaam Alaikum :salam:



November ke month me hum ne



Judaii Raat Poetry Competition



rakha tha, ab waqt hai voting ka.:thmbup:



Vote karne se pehle entries zaror check kar liye ga :thmbup:


Vote karne ki last date 1st Dec 2009


Entries are shown below


*Hala* entry

jiwan bhaR ki hay yeh kamaey
ansoo ,yadein , aur judai

lamham lamha bay bass dil ko
dasti rehti hay tanhae

yadoon Say ghumsan kay run mein
har shab hoti hay paspaey

meray saath bhi beet rahi hay
ek kahani suni sunaaey

har ek roop mein hay wo mera
kesay keh don phir har jaae

bass mein hota rok he leta
honay deta kion riswae.




thefire1 entry

USAY KEHNA
Usay Kehna Mukammal Kuch Nahi Hota
Milan Bhi Na Mukammal Hay
JUDAII Bhi Adhoori Hay
Haan Ek Mout Poori Hay

USAY KEHNA
Udaasi Jab Ragoon Main Khoon Ki Maanind Utarti Hay
Bohat Nuqsan Karti Hay

USAY KEHNA
Bisat-e-Ishq Main Jab Rat Hoti Hay
Tu Ankh Say Ansooo Taray Ban Kar Chamaktay Hain!

USAY KEHNA
Usay Kehna Mukammal Kuch Nahi Hota
Mukammal Bus Khuda Ki Zaat Hoti Hay

saraah entry

جدائی کے موسم میں
اترتی شام سے پہلے
میری یخ بستہ آنکھوں میں
خاموشی رقص کرتی ہے
تو اس کی یاد کی پائل
یوں میرے کان میں آکرمسلسل چھنچھناتی ہے
تو پھر یک دم خاموشی کا تسلسل ٹوٹ جاتا ہے
پھر ایسے میں کوئی کوئل
بڑے ہی کرب سے کوکے
تو یوں محسوس ہوتا ہے
جیسے بے سبب کوئی کسی کو یاد کرتا ہے
جدائی کے موسم میں


_Dard_Aashna_ entry


Is Dil Nay Teray Baray Main, Pocha To Bohat Roya
Woh Shakhs Jo Patthar Tha Toota To Bohat Roya

Yeh Dil Jo Judai Keh Unwaa'N Pay Barsoo'N Say
Chhup Tha To Bohat Chhup Tha, Roya To Bohat Roya

Ik Hurf Tasalli Ka Ik Lafa Muhabbat Ka
Khud Apnay Liye Uss Nay Likha To Bohat Roya

Pehlay Bhi Shikasto'N Pay Khaae Hay Shikast Uss Nay
Lekin Woh Teray Haatho'N Haara To Bohat Roya

Jo Ehad Nibhanay Ki Deta Tha Duaa Uss Nay
Kal Shaam Mujhe Tanha Dekha To Bohat Roya !!




Mr.Khan's entry




BadMan entry






crystal_thinking entry






Tanha Hassan entry




mehwish asfar entry

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

*Rida* entry

[thefire1]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

Walaikum Assalaam

Iss baar kaafi hard time dia VOTING nay kiyonki sab ki entries hi lajawaab thi, good luck to everyone.

Mr. Khan iss section main multiple choices voting kiyon hay?

Fi Amaan ALLAH

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

voted rida

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

Walaikum Assalaam

Iss baar kaafi hard time dia VOTING nay kiyonki sab ki entries hi lajawaab thi, good luck to everyone.

Mr. Khan iss section main multiple choices voting kiyon hay?

Fi Amaan ALLAH

Jo sawal aap poch rahe hen uska jawab to aap khud uppar apne comments me de chuke hen :)

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

Assalam o Alaikum WR WB..

Voted :)
Best of luck....

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

voted

[kutkutariyaan]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

Voted chiips

To All

[crystal_thinking]

Re: Polling for Judaii Poetry Competition

mry sy yeh miss ho gea tha 372-scare...
bt mre vote rida sis k liya he hota bt its my bad luck k men isy bhol gae tha