~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

[Mr.Khan]

Assalaam Alaikum Ahl-e-Bazm :salam:

Umeed hai ke aap sub kheriyat se hon ge :)

~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

Aap sub se Judaii ke topic per entries matloob hen.

Umeed karta hon ke pichlay competitions ki tarah is competition

me bhi aap sub bharpoor hissa len ge :)

Rules:

:) Har participant sirf ek ghazal share kar sakta hai.

:) Pehle se share ki gaii entry repeat nahi kiya jayega.

:) Edited entry ko qabool nahi kiya jaye ga.

:) Competition me hissa lene ki aakhri tareekh 25th Nov 2009 hai.

[*Hala*]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

W.Salam

jiwan bhaR ki hay yeh kamaey
ansoo ,yadein , aur judai

lamham lamha bay bass dil ko
dasti rehti hay tanhae

yadoon Say ghumsan kay run mein
har shab hoti hay paspaey

meray saath bhi beet rahi hay
ek kahani suni sunaaey

har ek roop mein hay wo mera
kesay keh don phir har jaae

bass mein hota rok he leta
honay deta kion riswae.

:embarasse

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

W.Salam

jiwan bhaR ki hay yeh kamaey

ansoo ,yadein , aur judai

lamham lamha bay bass dil ko

dasti rehti hay tanhae

Buhat umda entry :clap:

[S.Athar]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

Is Tarha K kamon Main hamara kia kam jin ko Threed,Post karny ka pata Hi Nahin Chal rahar. Filhal Ap yah bata din k kia Shair Wagira k liay Shayr,Gazl,ki munasbat sya Drawing Mukhtalif Pitchers ko Jor Kar bana saktay hayn:mm:

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

Is Tarha K kamon Main hamara kia kam jin ko Threed,Post karny ka pata Hi Nahin Chal rahar. Filhal Ap yah bata din k kia Shair Wagira k liay Shayr,Gazl,ki munasbat sya Drawing Mukhtalif Pitchers ko Jor Kar bana saktay hayn:mm:

koi picture image nahi jorni hia , seedhi seedhi aisi koi ghazal post kar den jis me word Judaii aata ho :tasali:

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

My entry :rose

[thefire1]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

Walaikum Assalaam

Wah bohat hi khoosburat entries hain Khan aap ki aur Hala ki, really enjoyed reading it....

Laikin Samajh nahin araha hay kay SEPTEMBER ka competition NOVERMBER main kiyon :mm: Khan kuch roshni dalain agar ghalti say likha hay tou ROSHNAYI daalain :lol

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

Walaikum Assalaam

Wah bohat hi khoosburat entries hain Khan aap ki aur Hala ki, really enjoyed reading it....

Laikin Samajh nahin araha hay kay SEPTEMBER ka competition NOVERMBER main kiyon :mm: Khan kuch roshni dalain agar ghalti say likha hay tou ROSHNAYI daalain :lol

Ye competition Sept me post hona tha but Delay ho gaya tha is liye ghalti se edit nahi ho saka .............. ab daal li 1000 watt ki roshni :lol

[*Rida*]

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beautiful entries Hala... aur Khaan bhai....

[*Rida*]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

:rose :rose :rose

[crystal_thinking]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

bhot khob.. rida u ki to bhot he fitu hy... INSHALLAH i'll participate

[thefire1]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

great entry Rida jee, cha gayin aap :)

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

:rose :rose :rose

Award winning entry

[thefire1]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

Assalaam-O-Alaikum ahal-e-sukhan!

Meri ENTRY aap sab ki nazar, competition ka maza ussi waqt aata hay jab sayeri wazandaar hoo, aur dil kay paar ho!!!

Mukhtasir si yeh nazam aap sab ki khidmat main paish kar raha hoon umeed hay pasand zaroor aayegi!!!


USAY KEHNA
Usay Kehna Mukammal Kuch Nahi Hota
Milan Bhi Na Mukammal Hay
JUDAII Bhi Adhoori Hay
Haan Ek Mout Poori Hay

USAY KEHNA
Udaasi Jab Ragoon Main Khoon Ki Maanind Utarti Hay
Bohat Nuqsan Karti Hay

USAY KEHNA
Bisat-e-Ishq Main Jab Rat Hoti Hay
Tu Ankh Say Ansooo Taray Ban Kar Chamaktay Hain!

USAY KEHNA
Usay Kehna Mukammal Kuch Nahi Hota
Mukammal Bus Khuda Ki Zaat Hoti Hay

[*Hala*]

Re: ~* Judaii Poetry Competition ~ Nov 2009 *~

buht khubsurat enteries hai app teeno ki Rida jani, Khan bhai aur Ali ji