na chaho itna hamain

[D@y W@lk3r]

na chaho itna hamain chahato se dar lagta hai
na aaoo qareeb itna k judai se dar lagta hai
suna hai mohabbat qurbani mangti hai
qurbani dene se ab dar lagta hai
tumhari wafaoon per yaqeen hai
apni zaat se dar lagta hai
soocha na tha kisi ko itna chahenge
ab to apni soochoon se bhi dar lagta hai

[thefire1]

Re: na chaho itna hamain

Bohat achi koshish hay day walker, agar aap nay likhi hay tou thoRa saa wazan aur daalain iss say behtar hosakti hay :)

[D@y W@lk3r]

Re: na chaho itna hamain

Bohat achi koshish hay day walker, agar aap nay likhi hay tou thoRa saa wazan aur daalain iss say behtar hosakti hay :)

thankx wazaan dalnay kay liyah to koi moti honi chahay...:fight:

[thefire1]

Re: na chaho itna hamain

moti ho yaa patlee hoo.... wazan tou khudh ba khudh paida hojaata hay jab koi cheese bilkul dil say concentration say aur aik damm focus hokar likhi jaayay.... koshish tou karain kisi moti ka hi taswurr kar kay likh lain, magar yaad rakhna badan kay wazan main kahin aap moti aqal say kaam na laina.... dimagh ko hazir rakhain... badni utaar chaRayo tou hotay rehtay hain, motay patlay aur patlay motay hotay rehtay hain, magar aqal ek baar moti hogayi tou patli nahin hogi... baRay WAZAN ki baat keh gaya hoon... ghhour zaroor karna :)