Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

[umeryz]

ye ghazal dhond kr do plz

kyoun bhool gaye hum ko Rishta to purana tha,
Aik ye b zmana hai Aik wo b zmana tha

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

I think mere pas hai ye Ghazal cell mein save hai
dhoond ker aap ko de donga

[umeryz]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

Mein wait kr ra hoo ...

[Soulmate]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

ye ghazal dhond kr do plz

kyoun bhool gaye hum ko Rishta to purana tha,
Aik ye b zmana hai Aik wo b zmana tha

agar poet ka naam pata chal jaye tu dhondne mein easy rahe ga

[thefire1]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

Aisi ki baat hay, aisi kia yaad wabasta hay... kisi aur ghazal say kaam kiyon nahin chalatay, issi ko kiyon dhoondh rahay hain.... ?!:)

[umeryz]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

Asal mein ye ghazal kisi ki demand hai - aur poet ka name muje nai pta ..

[umeryz]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

Pegham users mein se kisi k pas ye ghazal nai kya?

[thefire1]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

Bhai main tumhari takleef ko samajhta hoon, magar meray paas hoti tou main ab tak post zaroor kar daita...

Khudh hi kiyon nahin bana laitay iss ghazal ko, kuch mushkil nahin, bas kuch himmat say kaam lo, concentrate karo, aur aik damm focus hokar srif aur srif uss shaks kay baaray main socho jis nay tum say iss ki farmayish ki hay, lafz khudh ba khudh ashaar ki laRiyon main piro kar GHAZAL na bana dain tou dekhna.... :)

[umeryz]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

merbani thefire bhai, bt muje orignal chahiye !!

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

Sorry dear ye Ghazal mere paas thi mager mujh se delete ho gai hai
mein apnay friends se pochhta hon ager kisi k paas hui to aap ko send ker donga

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

ye poem mujhe mil to gai hai mager i think k ek do misre ab bhi missing hain

Kion bhool gaye hum ko rishta to purana tha
ek ye bhi zamana hai ek woh bhi zamana tha

rangeen fizain thi, shokh adain thi,

jazboon ki jawani thi mousam bhi suhana tha

seenay se lagaya tha, aankhooN mein bithaya tha

maloom na tha tum ne youn chhor k jana tha

kion hum se khafa ho tum? kion hum se juda ho tum?

(mujhe ye poem bas yahan tak he miil saki hai)

[umeryz]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

thank u

[the_shadow]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

yeah lo ji pori ghazal





Kyun Bhool Gaye Humko,
Rishta Toh Purana Tha,
Ik Yeh Bhi Zamana Hai,
Ik Woh BHi Zamana Tha,
Rangeen Fizaen Thin,
Aur Shokh Adaen Thin,
Jazbon Pe Jawani Thi,
Mousam BHi Suhana THa,
seenay se Lagaya Tha,
Ankhon Pe Bithaya Tha,
Maloom Na THa,
Tumne Yun Chor K Jana Tha,
Kyun Hum Se Khafa Ho Tum,
Kyun Hum Se Juda Ho Tum,
Kya JUrm Hua Humse,
Itna Toh Batana Tha,
Kyun Bhool Gaye Humko,
Rishta toh Purana Thaa......!!!
nafrat say bhari nazrain,
ik ja he lay baithi,
tukray bhi kiay dil kay,
kia khoob nishana tha.....!!!!
Kyun Bhool Gaye Humko,
Rishta toh Purana Thaa......!!!

[umeryz]

Re: Ye Ghazal Chahiye!

thank u the_shadow