Bazm-e-Ummid

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

See ke lab ek qayaamat si uthaa di jaey........
Reh ke khamosh zara dhoom macha di jaey.

Jis ko dekho wohi sehra mein chala aata hay
Rastay mein koi dewaar uthaa di jaey...........

:thmbup: cool ....thanks for sharing :phool:

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

:thmbup: cool ....thanks for sharing :phool:

Thank you Esha dear!!:phool:

[shakeeel]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

this is a beautiful collection,
mein ne aap ki sari collection read ki hai aur bohat pasand aayi hai.
mein is mein se kuch kalam "aaj ka kalam" mein compose karun ga, aap ki ijazat se?
ALLAH aap ko kush rakhe.

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

this is a beautiful collection,
mein ne aap ki sari collection read ki hai aur bohat pasand aayi hai.
mein is mein se kuch kalam "aaj ka kalam" mein compose karun ga, aap ki ijazat se?
ALLAH aap ko kush rakhe.

Thank you bhai....:phool:
Aap ko ijazat ki zarorat nahi hai....:na:
Aap jo chahe karsakte hain is collection ke saath.....:shh:
khush rahiye..:)

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

tumhaare shaiher kaa mausam baraa suhaanaa lage....
main ek shaam churaa loon, agar buraa na lage ...

tumhaare bus main agar ho to bhool jaao hamain..
tumhain bhulane main shaayad mujhe zamaanaa lage.

hamaare pyaar se jalne lagii hai ye duniyaa....
duaa karo kisii dushman ki bad_duaa na lage.

na jaane kyaa hai us kii bebaak aankhon main...
vo moonh chhupaa ke jaaye bhii to bevafaa na lage.

jo Doobnaa hai to itne sukoon se Doobo....
ke aas paas kii lahron ko bhii pataa na lage.

ho jis adaa se mere saath bewafa'iy kar...
ke tere baad mujhe koi bewafaa na lage..

vo phool jo mere daaman se ho gaye mansoob
Khudaa kare unhain baazaar kii havaa na lage

tum aankh moond ke pii jaao zindagii 'Qaiser'...
ke ek ghoont main shaayad ye bad'mazaa na lage.

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

tumhaare shaiher kaa mausam baraa suhaanaa lage....
main ek shaam churaa loon, agar buraa na lage ...
bohat umdah ghazal hai ummid .. Thanks for sharing:phool:

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

waah Ummid, waah :rose bahot hii Khoob Ghazal paRhvaaii hai aapne hameN. ek ek she'r meN taaseer-e-akseer hai...davaa-e-dard-e-moHabbat kii daastaan-e-'azeez hai...shulria share karne ke liye ummid...KHush rahiiye, shaad tahiiye aur aabaad rahiiye. :rose

Thank you sooooooooooooo much...:phool:
waise ek ghazal kya padhai aap ne itni duwaien de di...:)
ager pura deewan padha dete tu aap tu "BABA" ban jate....:lol

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

tumhaare shaiher kaa mausam baraa suhaanaa lage....
main ek shaam churaa loon, agar buraa na lage ...
bohat umdah ghazal hai ummid .. Thanks for sharing:phool:

:phool:

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

aey umer-e-rawan aa pass mere.....

aik raz ki baat batani hai....

aik khwab sunana hai tujh ko....

aik tees si dil k ander hai.....

aik rang dikhana hai tujh ko....

aey umer-e-rawan aa pass merey....

ye neem shabi ki khamoshi...

ye neend ki palkein bojhal si..

ye parda-e-der,

ye zehar nazer,

aik khof sa zehan-o-dil main hai....

tanhai meri chupkey say kahe,

aey umer-e-rawan aa pass merey....

tujh say tu faqat kehna hai mujhey,

raftar ko apni dheema rakh...

milnay ki gharri jo thehri hai...

do char sadi ya ab k bars....

"AIK SHAKHS SAY MILNA HAY MUJH KO"

aey umer-e-rawan ...

[Masood]

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Bohat khoobsurat behna bohat umdah - keep it up - on a higher note :D

[ummid]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

Bohat khoobsurat behna bohat umdah - keep it up - on a higher note :D

Aap ki "higher note" wali baat ke jawab mein ek aur nazam...:)
shaid aap ko pasand aye..

"kab kaun kisi ka hota hai"

kab kaun kisi ka hota hai.....

sab jhootay rishtay naatay hain...

sab dil rakhnay ki baatain hain....

sab aslee roop chupatay hain...

ikhlaaq say khali log yahan....

lafzon key teer chalatey hain..

Aik baar nigaahon mein aa ker...

phir saari umer rulatay hain..

lo jis nay humain hain ashk diye..

ab us ko bhool hi jaatay hain!!!

[jugnoo217]

Re: muhhabbat

:rose jab kabhi khwaab ki ummid bandha karti hai,
neend aankhon mein pareshan phira karti hai.
yaad rakhna hi muhabbat mein nahi hai sab kuch,
bhool jana bhi badi baat hoa karti hai!:rose

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[ummid]

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:phool:

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Bazm-e-Ummid

aslaam_u_alikam

wonderful collection

[ummid]

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Manzeelein

"Ajnabi si rahon ka......


Ajnabi musafir aik..........


Mujh se pooch baitha hai.....


rasta bata do gye???????


ajnabi si rahon ke....


ajnabi musafir sun.....


rasta koi bhi ho...


wasta koi bhi ho......


manzalein nahi miltein.......


manzalein to dhoka hain.....


manzalein jo mil jayein.....


tu justajoo nahi rehti.....


zindagi ko jeene ki."