Bazm-e-Ummid

[Kainat]

Re: Pathar kay khuda pathar kay sanam

Buhat khoob Ummid SIS :thmbup: THX FOR SHARING :phool:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Pathar kay khuda pathar kay sanam

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

Bhot umda

FeamanAllah

[ummid]

teri yaad

zehan ke khayalon main

rooh ke ujaloon main

zindgi ki jheelon main

zaat ki fasiloon main

ratjagon ke daman main

khawahishoon ke aangan main

dil ke khushk sehra main

chasm-e-tar ke darya main

dard ke jahan main bhi

ask-e-bezuban main bhi

aur kuch nahi rehta

TERI YAAD rehti hai

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: teri yaad

Assalam_O_Alaikum,
Behna Boaht umda sharing ki hai aap nay:rose Khush raho

[Masood]

Re: teri yaad

Ummid aap ney hamesha achhi shairi share ki hai - keep it up :)

[ummid]

Re: teri yaad

waah bhai waah Umeed, bahot zabardast kalaam sunaayaa apnaa...kia baat hai aaj kal kia bas AAMAD AAMAD hai jo dhaRaa dhaR kalaam qalam_zad ho rahe haiN? mubaarkaaN,,,bahot Khoob! :rose

thanx:rose

[ummid]

Re: teri yaad

Assalam_O_Alaikum,
Behna Boaht umda sharing ki hai aap nay:rose Khush raho

waalaikumassalam.
pasand karne ke liye shukriya:rose
khush raho.

[ummid]

Re: teri yaad

Ummid aap ney hamesha achhi shairi share ki hai - keep it up :)

aap ne kaafi time baad hume kisi shairing ke liye reply kiya hai....
humari shairing ko sub se zyada aap hi encourage karte aaye hain....
shukriya:phool:

[*Rida*]

Re: teri yaad

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

v v v vnice sharing

[ummid]

mohabbat ik nazam.............

hume nahi pata yeh kis ki nazam hai per acchi lagi isiliye aap logon se shair kar rahe hain......:)


MOHABBAT jeet hotee hai

MOHABBAT maat hotee hai...

MOHABBAT zaat hotee hai...

MOHABBAT.....Zaat ki taqmeel hotee hai

Koi bastee mein ja thehray

Kisi jungle main bas jaey

MOHABBAT saath hotee hai...

MOHABBAT rag hotee hai...

Ager hum ko khaber hotee..........

Na hum iss rag ko gatay

Na hum iss aag main jaltay

MOHABBAT jaal hote hai...

Bohat janjal hotee hai

Ager hum ko khaber hotee.......

Na hum iss jaal main aatay

Na iss janjal main aatay

MOHABBAT rog hotee hai...

MOHABBAT sog hotee hai...

Ager hum ko khaber hotee.......

Na hum iss rog ko sehtay

Na hum iss sog main khotay

MOHABBAT jhoot hotee hai...

MOHABBAT ek fasana hai

Ager hum ko khaber hotee......

Na tera asra rakhtay

Na tere aas main jeetay

MOHABBAT.........Ker k pachtaey.......

Kion dil ki baat main aaey?

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: mohabbat ik nazam.............

wah ry mohabbat teri konsi kal seedi

[*Rida*]

Re: mohabbat ik nazam.............

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

niceee

[ummid]

Re: mohabbat ik nazam.............

:rose Thanx a lot....:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: mohabbat ik nazam.............

U welCome

[Shaim]

Re: mohabbat ik nazam.............

Hmmm
buhat sweet c nicooo c poem hai Ummid sis!:rose
me ko buhat acchi lagi:wk
waiting 4 moore!:shh: