My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

[AASHNA]

yado'n k hasee'n deep bujhaye nahee'n jaatey
aur ashk bhi aankho'ns e bahaa'ye nahee'n jaatey

jo dil mai sama jayai'n faqat aik nazar mai
wo laug kabhi dil se bhulaye nahi jatey

mai dard kisi aur se kehta bhi tau kaisey
sab laug tau ham'raaz banaye nahi jatey

roshan tha kabhi jinn se merey pyar ka aangan
abb deep wo chahat k jalaye nahee'n jatey

jo zakhm ZAFAR jaan se pyaro'n ne diye ho'n
wo zakhm zamane ko dikhaye nahee'n jatey

[saraah]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

wahhh bohat khoob
keep it up

[imransem]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

Bahut khoob

[AASHNA]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

wahhh bohat khoob
keep it up

thanks saraah jee meri pehli choice par
commnets ka...................

[AASHNA]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

Bahut khoob

boht shukria Imaran jee..............

[azeems]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

Nice One Aashna jee

[AASHNA]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

Nice One Aashna jee

thx azeem jee...................

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

bahot khoob janab nice sharing

[AASHNA]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

bahot khoob janab nice sharing

boht shukria wasi anjum jee...............

[life.]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

v nice............................

[AASHNA]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

v nice............................

boht shukria life jee...............

[*Rida*]

Re: My 1st sharing in pegham-aik ghazal

buht khoob....:thmbup: