Hawa Chali Hay Raat Bhar

[hayaa_n]

:rose Hawa chali hay raat bhar diya magar bujha nahi
:rose Sulag raha tha dil meira dhuwa'n magar utha nahi

:rose Mujhay mili hay har khushi main kitna khush naseeb hun
:rose Magar ajeeb baat hay main aaj tak hansa nahi

:rose Main haal-e-dil suna chuka mujhay woh deikhta raha
:rose Ruka raha woh chal diya kay jeisay kuch suna nahi

:rose Khutoot dosto'n kay naam aaey hain jo gaaon say
:rose Kisi bhi khat main naam ko bhi meira tazkira nahi

:rose Main khud kalamiyo'n main is qadar hun be'khabar
:rose Diye pay haath rakh diya to haath bhi jala nahi


:rose Woh muddato'n say yaar-e-be'riya mujhay mila nahi..

['SamRazi']

Re: Hawa Chali Hay Raat Bhar

:rose Hawa chali hay raat bhar diya magar bujha nahi
:rose Sulag raha tha dil meira dhuwa'n magar utha nahi

:rose Mujhay mili hay har khushi main kitna khush naseeb hun
:rose Magar ajeeb baat hay main aaj tak hansa nahi

:rose Main haal-e-dil suna chuka mujhay woh deikhta raha
:rose Ruka raha woh chal diya kay jeisay kuch suna nahi

:rose Khutoot dosto'n kay naam aaey hain jo gaaon say
:rose Kisi bhi khat main naam ko bhi meira tazkira nahi

:rose Main khud kalamiyo'n main is qadar hun be'khabar
:rose Diye pay haath rakh diya to haath bhi jala nahi


:rose Woh muddato'n say yaar-e-be'riya mujhay mila nahi..

:masha Dear buhut zaabrdast kalam share kiya hai :thmbup:

main inshallah issey ek achey se background per compose kene ki koshish kero gi :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hawa Chali Hay Raat Bhar

:jazak: :) Saima ji aap k reply say main bouhat khush ho gai..bouhat shukriya itnay howsla afza jawaab k liye.:) mujhay to yeh sab nahi aata, agar aap isay compose karain gi to mujhay khushi hogi.:)

[sheem]

Re: Hawa Chali Hay Raat Bhar

bohat achi sharing hai haya

maza agaya parh ke :x

thanx

[hayaa_n]

Re: Hawa Chali Hay Raat Bhar

bohat achi sharing hai haya

maza agaya parh ke :x

thanx

Sheem ji howsla afzaai ka bouhat bouhat shukriya..:)

[Enigmatic]

Re: Hawa Chali Hay Raat Bhar

:rose Bohat khoob Haya :rose