Ghazal

[sheem]

Bagh main jhooly rat main wo taray nahi dikhtay

hamary sath ho ker b wo hamary nahi dikhtay

lot aya hon usi mor pe jahan milay thy ham tum

hath main hath nahi hai wo nazary nahi dikhtay

kal talk jo mery sath thy achy waqtoon main

aaj mushkil hai ,main hon wo saray nahi dikhtay

lo man lia ab b hai mujh se mohabat baqi

adayeen shookh nahi hain wo ishary nahi dikhaty

seena e samander b cheer ke jin se mila kerteen theen

udas moojeen dhondhteen hain wo kinary nahi dikhtay

bary shooq se gitay thy Najam sambhaly jatay thy

ab gareen b to kaisy wo saharay nahi dikhaty

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Ghazal

Assalaam o alekum,


waaaah bahoot khoob bahoot hi umdeh ek behtreen tehreer humse share ki aapnien shukriya humse share kernien aur haan ager shair kaa naam likhaa hootaa to achchaa hootaa :)

bary shooq se gitay thy Najam sambhaly jatay thy

ab gareen b to kaisy wo saharay nahi dikhaty

[Yaaram]

Re: Ghazal

Bohat umdah ...keep sharing :)

[naz]

Re: Ghazal

nice...!

[sufiaamir]

Re: Ghazal

Good and nice