Suno Larki ...

[Jothic]

Suno Larki ! Abhi Tum Ishq Mat Karna Abhi Guriya Se Khelo Tum Tumhari Umar Hi Kya Hai Faqt Satra Baras Ki Ho Abhi Masoom Bachi Ho Nahin Maloom Abhi Tum Ko K Jab Yeh Ishq Hota Hai To Insaan Kitna Rota Hai Sitaray Toot Jatay Hain Saharay Choot Jatay Hain Abhi Tum Nay Nahin Dekha K Jab Sathi Bichartay Hain Tu Kitna Dard Milta Hai K Har Furqat K Mousam Main Hazaron Ghum Ubhartay Hain Hazaron Zakhm Khultay Hain Suno Larki ! ..... ~ Meri Mano ! .. Parhai Par Tawajo Do Kitaabon Main Gulabon Ko Kabhi Bhoolay Say Mat Rakhna Kitabain Jab Bhi Kholo Gi Yeh Kanton Ki Tarhan Dil Main Chubhain Gay Khoon Bahayen Ge Tumhain Pehron Satayen Ge Kisi Ko Khat Nahin Likhna Likhai Pakri Jati Hai Bari Ruswai Hoti Hai Kisi Ko Phone Mat Karna Sadayen Dil Dukhati Hain Woh Awazain Satati Hain Meri Nazmain Nahin Parhna Yeh Mehshar Utha Dein Gi Tumhain Pagal Bana Dein Gi Suno Larki ! ..... ~ Meri Mano ~ Apni Taqdeer Say Tum Khul K Mat Larna Abhi Guriya Se Khelo Tum Abhi Tum Ishq Mat Karna

[hayaa_n]

Re: Suno Larki ...

Agar aap is ko shair ki aur misron ki tarteeb main likh thei'n to bouhat shukriya.is tarha achi bhi lagay gi aur easily read bhi ho sakay gi.bouhat shukriya.:)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Suno Larki ...

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

May nay ya nazam parhi hui hy bhotr hi umda hay

Thx :)

FeaamnAllah

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Suno Larki ...

truly speeking....... nazam ka start achaa hai per baad main nazam ke misroon woh wazan ya woh claas nahin jo start main ..
wasey ek baat aur hai aj kal ke ladkiyon jo 17 years ke hon woh godiyon se khalti hi nahin.. meraa khiyal hai ke ladkiyan meri himyat kerin ge as baat main..
over all achi koshis hai ya nazam .. ya imporve ho sakti hai aur plez us ko
allag allag line main lkein tu padhnain main asaani ho..

[~Aashoo~]

Re: Suno Larki ...

really nice sharing

[Soulmate]

Re: Suno Larki ...

buhaaaaaaaaaa achat

[Nisa*]

Re: Suno Larki ...

bahut bahut bahut khobsurat bahut shukriya
wasalaam...

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: Suno Larki ...

nice..............................

[i see u]

Re: Suno Larki ...

nice sharing

[sarfraz_qamar]

Re: Suno Larki ...

nice one