Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

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372-scareMy First Post I hope u like it372-scare

guzertay lamhoon mujhey batao
k zindagi ka asool kia hai

agar tamam hatoon mein aainey hain
to koon kisi se chupa hoa hai

agar sada ka wagood kanoon se munsalik hai
to koon khushboo mein bolta hai

agar samander ki hud hai sahil
to koon aankhoon mein phelta hai

agar tamam cheezen yehi hain
to koon cheezoon se mavra hai

kise khabar badelti rut ne
puraney patoon se kia kaha hai

yeh koon badal se ja k pochey
k itney mosam kahan raha hai

guzertey lamhoon mujhey batao
k zindagi ka asool kia hai

[saraah]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

MY FABOURITE GAZAL....
V GOOD......:thmbup:
KEEP SHARING

[Dr Fausts]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

agar samander ki hud hai sahil
to koon aankhoon mein phelta hai

welcome here

Bohat Khoob janab magar ya nazm complete nahii likhi ap na
anyhow jita portion share kia zaberdast ha



Khush rehay Janab




Tabani

[Dr Fausts]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

MY FABOURITE GAZAL....
V GOOD......:thmbup:
KEEP SHARING

:na:



ya nazm ha madam

[phonix_24]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

MY FABOURITE GAZAL....

V GOOD......:thmbup:
KEEP SHARING

agar samander ki hud hai sahil

to koon aankhoon mein phelta hai

welcome here

Bohat Khoob janab magar ya nazm complete nahii likhi ap na
anyhow jita portion share kia zaberdast ha
Khush rehay Janab

Tabani

Thanks:jazak:friends

[saraah]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

:na:



ya nazm ha madam

:embarasse..YEH MUJE KYA HOGYA HAI.........372-scare

[MuQadas]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

nice hai

[Dr Fausts]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

nice hai

wah Bara " VADA " inkashaf Kia ap na ka nice ha
warna humain tu pata hi nahii tha


:zuban:

[phonix_24]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

:embarasse..YEH MUJE KYA HOGYA HAI.........372-scare

nice hai

wah Bara " VADA " inkashaf Kia ap na ka nice ha
warna humain tu pata hi nahii tha

:zuban:

Sukria All Friends:salam:

[soni kudi]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

aap ki 1st post bohat achi hai..or umeed hai k ainda b aap achi post karo gay

[phonix_24]

Re: Guzertay Lamhoon Mujhey Batao...

aap ki 1st post bohat achi hai..or umeed hai k ainda b aap achi post karo gay

:jazak:&:insha: