seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

[SherAli]

salaam dosto,

aapkii Khidmat men vaalid-e-marHoom kii Ghazal pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huN. ummeed hai k pasand aayegii. aapkii aaraa kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa :) shukria.

1.
sar taa ba-qadam Husn vo samaan-e-tamanna
ek ek adaa silsila-e-jumbaan-e-tamanna

2.
us 'aariz-e-naazuk pe mirii har nigeh-e-shauq
ik mauj-e-naseem-e-chamanistaan-e-tamannaa

3.
ho fikr bar-aane kii havis hii ko mubaarak
yeh kaavish-e-be_jaa nahiiN shaayaan-e-tamannaa

4.
ham soKhta jaanoN ko na chheR, ai nigeh-e-dost!
seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamannaa

5.
dekho to zaraa laala-o-gul kaa kabhii khilnaa
kis rang meN hai Khoon-e-shaheedaan-e-tamannaa

6.
jab jamm'a huye shauq ke ajzaa~-e-parishaaN
baiThaa thaa kaleje emN vohii jaan-e-tamannaa

7.
terii nigeh-e-naaz ne phooNkii hai yahaaN rooH
sotaa thaa paRaaopai'kar-e-be_jaan-e-tamannaa

8.
us ruKh pe hai rang ik Khaamosh talaatum
jis tarHa mirii rooH meN haijaan-e-tamannaa

9.
ai maSlaHat-e-'aql! haTaa apnaa nasheman
aayii hai bahaar-e-sharar_afshaan-e-tamannaa

shukria

[*Rida*]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

wah buht hi zabardast... buht khobsorat alfaaz hain aur samajhnay mein bhi asaan....
perh kar buht acha laga....

[saraah]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

hmmmm sher ali parh li.....raelly nice....aakhiri sher tou gazal ki jaan ahi....:thmbup:

[*Hala*]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

buht khubsurat.............

[great_pisces]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

nice sharing

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

wah buht hi zabardast... buht khobsorat alfaaz hain aur samajhnay mein bhi asaan....
perh kar buht acha laga....

Rida saaHiba aapke ta'assuuraat paRh kar bahot achchhaa lagaa. aapne pasand farmaayaa ham aapke mutashakkiir haiN :)

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

hmmmm sher ali parh li.....raelly nice....aakhiri sher tou gazal ki jaan ahi....:thmbup:

Saara u kaa bahot abhot shukria k u ne Ghazal paRhii aur pasand kii...ji haN aaKhirii she'r mujhe bhii Haasil-e-Ghazal lagaa :) thankoo

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

buht khubsurat.............

shukria bahnaa..aapne pasand kiyaa...thankoo

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

nice sharing

thank you Pisces...shukria :)

[life.]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

wah buht hi zabardast

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

wah buht hi zabardast

shukria Lllife aapkaa k aapne kalaam pasand kiyaa aur us par apne ta'ssurata pesh kiye. :rose

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

nice

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

nice

thank you bro :)

[MuQadas]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal


w salam
ham soKhta jaanoN ko na chheR, ai nigeh-e-dost!
seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamannaa

wah bohat umdah zabar10

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

w salam
ham soKhta jaanoN ko na chheR, ai nigeh-e-dost!
seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamannaa

wah bohat umdah zabar10

Muqaddas, aapkaa shukria bahot bahot k aapne kalaam paRha aur ek she'r kii nishaan-dehii kii jo mujhe bhii bahot pasand hai...agar abba zinda hote to vo khud u ke sar pe haath rakh kar kahte...thank you, beTi :)