Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

[iiiiboyz]

ASSALAM-O-ALAIKUM
MEIN APNI SAB SE PASANDEEDA YEH GAZAL SAB DOSTON SE SHARE KARNA CHAHTA HON.I HOPE YOU GUYS WILL LIKE IT.
IF THERE,S ANY MISTAKE PLEASE FORGIVE ME.THANKS

KAASH MUQADDAR MEIN AISEY BHI AMAL HOTEY
UN JHEEL SI ANKHON MEIN HUM NEEL KANWAL HOTEY
KAT-TA TERI SANGAT MEIN HAR MOR MOHABBAT KA
REHBAR TERI ZULFOON KE YEH RESHMI BULL HOTEY
AE KAASH AJATEY KAL TUM BI WAHAN PAR JAHAN MEIN THA
KUCH FAASLEY KAM HOTEY, KUCH MASALAY HAL HOTEY
UNN KI RUSSWA-EE KA DARR HAI WAGARNA ASSIM
HUM JAB BHI GAZAL KEHTEY WOH JAANEY GAZAL HOTEY

Ras

[*Hala*]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

w.salam
welcome to pg..

@ nice ghazal.. keep sharing

[iiiiboyz]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

w.salam
Welcome To Pg..

@ Nice Ghazal.. Keep Sharing

Thanks Very Much Hala

[iiiiboyz]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

Hazaaron tukde kiye uss ne mere dil ke ,Faraz,
Khud hi ro pada har tukde pe apna naam dekh kar

[SherAli]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

ek achchhii Ghazal marHamat farmaane ke liye aapkaa shukria. ghazal meN ash'aar kam haiN. Ghazal kahlaane ke liye kam az kam 5 ash'aar to hone hii chaahiyeN varna vo ghazal nahiiN kahlaayegii :)

[iiiiboyz]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

ek achchhii Ghazal marHamat farmaane ke liye aapkaa shukria. ghazal meN ash'aar kam haiN. Ghazal kahlaane ke liye kam az kam 5 ash'aar to hone hii chaahiyeN varna vo ghazal nahiiN kahlaayegii :)

Insha ALLAH next time koshish karonga aisi galti na ho.daad deney ka bohat shukriya

[khan khan]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

Bohat khoob.

[iiiiboyz]

Re: Hum Neel Kanwal Hotey

thanks a lot khan bhai