Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

[MeemSheenAlif]

Masoom mohabbat ka bas itna fasana hai,

Kagaz ki haveli hai,baarish ka zamana hai,

Kya sharte mohabbat hai,kya sharte fasana hai,

Awaaz bhi zakhmi hai,aur geet bhi gaanaa hai,

Uss paar utaarne ki umeed bahut kam hai,

Kashti bhi purani hai,toofan ko bhi aana hai,

Samajhe ya na samajhe woh andaaze mohabbat
ke,
Ek shaksh ko aankhon se haal-e-dil sunana hai,

Masoom mohabbat ka bas itna hi fasana hai,

Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

[SherAli]

Re: Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

Masoom mohabbat ka bas itna fasana hai,

Kagaz ki haveli hai,baarish ka zamana hai,

Kya sharte mohabbat hai,kya sharte fasana hai,

Awaaz bhi zakhmi hai,aur geet bhi gaanaa hai,

Uss paar utaarne ki umeed bahut kam hai,

Kashti bhi purani hai,toofan ko bhi aana hai,

Samajhe ya na samajhe woh andaaze mohabbat
ke,
Ek shaksh ko aankhon se haal-e-dil sunana hai,

Masoom mohabbat ka bas itna hi fasana hai,

Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

Jigar Muradabadi ki ghazal ki achhi tazmin he. mere khayal se kuch ashar men kitabat ki ghalati ho gai he plz tasheeh farma len. shukria :)

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

Jigar Muradabadi ki ghazal ki achhi tazmin he. mere khayal se kuch ashar men kitabat ki ghalati ho gai he plz tasheeh farma len. shukria :)

galti:donno::donno:

mein ne to aik jaga perhi to yahan likh di...

kia galti he...??

[*Hala*]

Re: Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

nice sharing

[great_pisces]

Re: Ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob kar jana hai

nice