yeh kesey tum sey keh dun..............

[Fatima Asad]

aslaam_u_alikam

main jo gazal aap sab sey share kerney jaa rahi hun yeh mujhey behad pasand hey. magar is gazal key chand ashaar hi merey paas hain aur yeh ashaar merey paas tab ki hey jab main ney shairi ki dunya main qadam rakhaa thaa yani tan naya naya shauq tha shairi ka aur yeh wo gazal hey jo mujhey tab bohat achii lagii thi aur aaj tak zehan main mehfooz hey.mujhey sha`air ka naam to nahin pata magar umeed ekrtii hun keh aap sab ko bhi pasand aaye gii.
shukriya


yeh kesey tum sey keh dun asaan ho rahi hey
manzil merey liye to anjaan ho rahi hey

yeh soch ker akelii manzil ko chal pari hun
ab doston ki mujh ko pehchaan ho rahi hey

main kis terha sey apney ser ko chalun uthaa ker
merii anaa to us per qubaan ho rahi hey

jis khubaru kii khaatir her baat bhool bethey
yaad us ki merey dil main mehmaan ho rahi hey

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: yeh kesey tum sey keh dun..............

yeh kesey tum sey keh dun asaan ho rahi hey
manzil merey liye to anjaan ho rahi hey

yeh soch ker akelii manzil ko chal pari hun
ab doston ki mujh ko pehchaan ho rahi hey

main kis terha sey apney ser ko chalun uthaa ker
merii anaa to us per qubaan ho rahi hey

jis khubaru kii khaatir her baat bhool bethey
yaad us ki merey dil main mehmaan ho rahi hey

buhat hee khobsurat

[Fatima Asad]

Re: yeh kesey tum sey keh dun..............

aslaam_u_alikam

bohat shukriya aap ka.
magar sirf aik reply dekh ker dukh huaa:(

[Masood]

Re: yeh kesey tum sey keh dun..............

Main kuchh dino sey talaash mein hoon keh main ney yehi ghazal kahan parhi hai. Kuchh kuchh yaad aata hai magar kya kuchh yaad nahin :cc:

Fatimah aap jab bhi is mehfil mein aati ho bohat khoobsurat aur dil ko chhu leney waley intikhaab key saath aati ho. Aur pagli kab dukh nahin kartey :)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: yeh kesey tum sey keh dun..............

Main kuchh dino sey talaash mein hoon keh main ney yehi ghazal kahan parhi hai. Kuchh kuchh yaad aata hai magar kya kuchh yaad nahin :cc:

Fatimah aap jab bhi is mehfil mein aati ho bohat khoobsurat aur dil ko chhu leney waley intikhaab key saath aati ho. Aur pagli kab dukh nahin kartey :)

aslaam_u_alikam

shukriya masood sahib. agar aap ko yeh gazal puri miley to yahan zaroor post kijiye ga.

shukriya

[Yaaram]

Re: yeh kesey tum sey keh dun..............

Bohat umdah Fatimah :)