JaHaN ChAnD oR sUrAj...........

[mekaal]

JaHaN ChAnD oR sUrAj BaStE tHe
SaRa DiN wO aNgAn MaIn MiL kaR kHeLa KaRtE tHe
Ak DoJhE pEr Wo DiL_o_JaAn Se MaRtE tHe
PhIr Ak DiN yOn HoWa Wo ApAaS mAiN roOtH gAi
JoH sApNe DeKhE wO toOt GaI
Ab cHaNd WaHaN tAb AtA hAi
JaB sUrAj cHaLa JaTa HaI
JaB suRaJ aTa HaI tO ChAnD sO jAtA HaI
bAdAl Ya kEHtE HaI
Ya SuRaJ uLjHa UlJhA rEhTa HaI
ChAnD kE pAsS tO sItArEiN hAi
Ya SuRaJ tAnHa TaNhA rEhtA hAi

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: JaHaN ChAnD oR sUrAj...........

JoH sApNe DeKhE wO toOt GaI

Ab cHaNd WaHaN tAb AtA hAi

JaB sUrAj cHaLa JaTa HaI

JaB suRaJ aTa HaI tO ChAnD sO jAtA HaI


nice dis stanza
bohat achi hai bhai g aap ki poem send kerty raha kero

[La'hasil]

Re: JaHaN ChAnD oR sUrAj...........

Ahaan Buhat Khooob

[bakhtawer]

Re: JaHaN ChAnD oR sUrAj...........

hmmmmm acha hy!