Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

walekum asslam

meray pas to bas aik he shair hy


pichlay baras k ieid ka chaand acha tha

chaand ko dekh k us ka chehra dekha tha ...

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

walekum asslam

meray pas to bas aik he shair hy


pichlay baras k ieid ka chaand acha tha

chaand ko dekh k us ka chehra dekha tha ...

Ek hay par nehayet Umda shair hay.
Meray pas bhe eik he hay


sau chand bhi chamakenge to kya baat banegi
tum aaye tu is raat ki auqaat banegi
[Jan Nissar Akhtar]

[aquari]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

MUTFANIN or Dil_E_Veran
1 haii pr zaberdast haii :em:

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

Thnx Aquari,par ap ki Ghazlein phir baze lay gaein.:salam::thmbup:

[pinkrosejust4u]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

eid ke chaaNd ko dekh ker
mere lab kap-kapaaye
per yeH duaa
is saal bhi
mere honToN se azaad na hui
ke
ai kHuda!!!
ab ke mujhe chaaNd maiN us ka chehra
dikhaai na de....

har roz-e-eid tumhare muradoN ke
hasieN phuloN ke gHunche khila ke laaya ho
tumhari maaNg main afshaaN saje sitaaroN ki
tumhare saath kisi ba-wafa ka saya ho....





hum ne is saal bhi paayi na tere gHam se nijaat
hum ne is saal bhi na dekha eid ka chaaNd

na jaane kyuN mere rukHsaar mahak uTh-te haiN
jab kabhi kaan maiN woH chupke se kahe "eid ka chaaNd"

kHud chaand unheeN ki deed ki chaah meiN haazir-e-kHidmat hota hai
Woh chaand ki nazroN meiN aa'aiN ,eik rashk kaa aalam hota hai
kiyaa tum ko bataaiN ham yaro kiyaa zeest ka aalam hota hai
jab uTh-te haiN un ke hinaaee hath aur adab se sar kHam hotaa hai

[pinkrosejust4u]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

MUJH KO AIK KHUWABAY PARESHAN SA LAGA EID KA CHAND
MERI NAZRON MAIN ZARA BHI NA JACHA EID KA CHAND
ANKH NUM KARGAYA BICHRAY HUWE LOGO KA KHAYAL
DARDAY DIL DE KAY HUMAIN DOOB GAYA EID KA CHAND

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

MUJH KO AIK KHUWABAY PARESHAN SA LAGA EID KA CHAND

MERI NAZRON MAIN ZARA BHI NA JACHA EID KA CHAND
ANKH NUM KARGAYA BICHRAY HUWE LOGO KA KHAYAL
DARDAY DIL DE KAY HUMAIN DOOB GAYA EID KA CHAND

Nice.

[pinkrosejust4u]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

aane wali rutoN k aaNchal maiN
koi saaet-e-sayed kia ho gi
gul na ho ga to jashn-e-kHushbu kaisa
tum na ho ge toh eid kia ho gi

[pinkrosejust4u]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

ik lamhe ko maiN ne tujhe dekha tha
phir umar bhar meri nazar meiN na jacha eid ka chaaNd

Eid ke roz bhi majboor the taqdeer se ham
ro paRhe mil ke gale aap ki tasveer se ham

[pinkrosejust4u]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

Bin Dhaikhay usay "YA RABB", ye Eid na guzray
Ker paida koi aisa sabab, ye Eid na guzray
Duniya ko dikhaya haI, ik chand jo too nay
Mujh ko bhi dikha day abb yeh Eid na guzray

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

lol
nice

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

lol
nice

Thanks for your comments.

[aquari]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

Thnx Aquari,par ap ki Ghazlein phir baze lay gaein.:salam::thmbup:

ahan..:blush:
hum sey barey barey ba'zouq mojoud hain yahan...abhi tu poora month hai mazeed dekhyeaa ga kitni achi achi entries hongii

[aik_lerki]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

Wow
sab he nay bohat zabardast sharing kere hain :em:

[aik_lerki]

Re: Ashaar Related to the Topic October 2007

Mujhy to kahe mil he nahe ra tha CHAND RAAT py koe bhe gazal , nazm ya shair
To mai ny socha khude sy kuch tuk bandi kerte hon :khi:
Ek gazal likhny ki koshish kere hai :blush: