Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

i am going to share 1st poetry in Pegham Group , i hope every 1 like it

FeamanAllah

kitni aziyat se us ne mujhay bhulaya ho ga
meri yaad ne usay khob rulaya ho ga

baat be baat ankh jo us ki chalki ho gi
us ne chahray ko bazoon main chupaya ho ga

socha ho ga us ne din main kaii bar mujhay
naam hatheli pe bhi likh likh ker mitaya ho ga

jahan us ne mera ziker suna ho ga kisi se
us ki ankhon main koii anso tu aya ho ga

raat ko bhi der tak neend na aii ho gi
us ne takiyay ko bhi seenay se lagaya ho ga

Ho k nedhal meri yaadon se tu ne janan
meri tasweer se ser apna tikaya ho ga

pocha ho ga jo kisi ne teri halat ka sabab
tu ne baton baton main khob us se chupaya ho ga

jab kabhi chand ko dekha ho ga akaila tu ne
tujhay mera piyar bohat yaad aya ho ga

[Yaaram]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

Bohat khooooob jee umeed hayi ke aap ainda bhi aisa achi achi sharing karti rahein gi :)

[sheem]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

very nice sharing bheegi:phool:

['SamRazi']

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

Yeh meri pasandida Gazlo'n main se ek hai :)


Share kerney ke liyeh shukriya :rose

[Masood]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

socha ho ga us ne din main kaii bar mujhay
naam hatheli pe bhi likh likh ker mitaya ho ga

Aisa hota hai? Haan mujhey bhi yaqin hai key usney aisa kiya ho ga :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

wow grat buhat achay take care

[aik_lerki]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

Great :rose
Bohaat khoobsurat gazal hai

sPecially yay stanza

pocha ho ga jo kisi ne teri halat ka sabab
tu ne baton baton main khob us se chupaya ho ga
socha ho ga us ne din main kaii bar mujhay
naam hatheli pe bhi likh likh ker mitaya ho ga



Thankx 4 sharing :)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

Bohat khooooob jee umeed hayi ke aap ainda bhi aisa achi achi sharing karti rahein gi :)

Asslam-o-Alikum WRW B
Shukriya

FeamanAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

Great :rose
Bohaat khoobsurat gazal hai

sPecially yay stanza

pocha ho ga jo kisi ne teri halat ka sabab
tu ne baton baton main khob us se chupaya ho ga
socha ho ga us ne din main kaii bar mujhay
naam hatheli pe bhi likh likh ker mitaya ho ga



Thankx 4 sharing :)

Asslam-o-Alikum WRW B

Shukriya

FeaamnAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

wow grat buhat achay take care

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

thx

FeamanAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

very nice sharing bheegi:phool:

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Thx, ap whi ho na , jis ki smile bhot pyari hoti hy ?

FeaamnAllah

[*Moon*Corona*]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

guddd

[cutelibra]

Re: Kitni Aziyat Se Us Ne Mujhay Bhulaya Ho Ga

pocha ho ga jo kisi ne teri halat ka sabab
tu ne baton baton main khob us se chupaya ho ga
bohat khoobsorat haiiii

khush rahain