Shaair Kaun hai???

[Masood]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

:hehe: chor sipahi ham nahi khail rahay

yupp u r rigghtto
ye shair shair e mashriq k kalaam say he hay :ff:

aab aap ki baari

Dekha ham to lafafa dekh ker tehreer samajh jatey hain :lol

chalein ji abhi yeh shair sunein:::


Main hoon mushtaaq-e-Jafa Mujh per jafa aur sahi
tum ho bedaad mein khush, is sey siwa aur sahi
ghair ki marg ka gham kis liyey aey ghairat-e-maah
hain hawas-pesha bohat tu na huwa aur sahi

[aquari]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

Dekha ham to lafafa dekh ker tehreer samajh jatey hain :lol

chalein ji abhi yeh shair sunein:::


Main hoon mushtaaq-e-Jafa Mujh per jafa aur sahi
tum ho bedaad mein khush, is sey siwa aur sahi
ghair ki marg ka gham kis liyey aey ghairat-e-maah
hain hawas-pesha bohat tu na huwa aur sahi

Mirza ghalib:blush:

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

haan j galib chacha ka he hay


kahan gaye lifafay walay :soch:

[Masood]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

Mirza ghalib:blush:

Haan ji aap ka jawab drust huwa...

haan j galib chacha ka he hay


kahan gaye lifafay walay :soch:

Idher hain lifafey waley aap ney koi "khaas-letter" parhwana hai :p

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

Haan ji aap ka jawab drust huwa...



Idher hain lifafey waley aap ney koi "khaas-letter" parhwana hai :p

:embarasse aisay khaas kahtot lifafay walon say nai parhwaye jatay

:blush:

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

shair kab milay ga bojhnay k liye :soch:

[Masood]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

shair kab milay ga bojhnay k liye :soch:

Aap hi likh do na - Aquari next time likh dein gi :p

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

na bhi jis ki baari wohi lay :-p

[aquari]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

na bhi jis ki baari wohi lay :-p

lo ji hum agaye barii leney


Dil ki barbadi ka kya mazkoor hia
Yeh nagar soo martaba loota gaya

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

nasir kaazmi ?


[ inni dair say kiun ain baari lenay :a stick: koi hor lay leta tooo ]

[baqarkashmiri]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

Baqar sahib aap silsaley key saath saath kyun nahin chaltey? Is waqt jo shair Aquari ney diya hai uskey shaair kaan naam boojhiyey - baqi jab aap ki bari aai to apna shair post kijiye ga -shukriyah!

[aquari]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

nasir kaazmi ?


[ inni dair say kiun ain baari lenay :a stick: koi hor lay leta tooo ]

main thori masrrof thi
or masroofiyat ki waja Gupshup main mojoud haii :blush:
yahan ghalat jawab deney sey fursat ho tu dekhnaa:lpop:
jawab ghalat haii

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

:mm: waja ka naam bataya jaay


menu pehlay he patta tha k jawab galat he ho ga

[aquari]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???

:mm: waja ka naam bataya jaay


menu pehlay he patta tha k jawab galat he ho ga

Gupshup main dkeh loo..lag pata jaye gaa:wk
merey nam ka thread laga howa hai
koi baat nahi :comfort:

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Shaair Kaun hai???