Sadaf Aslam Ka Intikhaab

[Sadaf Aslam]

tere naqsh naqsh nay meri zinadgi ki kitab say
mera lafz lafz mitta diya
main k MUSAFIR_E_ISHQ tha
mujhy khaq khaq saja diya:rose

[aquari]

Re: meri Zindagi

very nice

[Sadaf Aslam]

be happy

sumjh jata hon lakin barri dair say main dao pech us k
woh bazzi jeet jata hai mery chalk hony tuk

[Ahsan Baloch]

Re: be happy

Nice Poetry, Thanks for Shearing and Welcome in Pegham Forum

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: be happy

nice sadaf Aslam ... Realy Good Poetry.... And Well Come To Pegham.Com Urdu Se pyar karne walon Kw Liye..

Salauddien Mengal.

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: be happy

nice one

[Sadaf Aslam]

zindagi

mare hath main haq ka janda hai..,. mare gale main phansi ka phanda hai... main moot se kab darta hoon.....main tu marne ki khater zinda hoon.... mare laho se suraj chamke ga ...tu bacha bacha bole ga.... main bagi hoon main baghi hoon jo chae kasam le lo

[Masood]

Re: zindagi

mare hath main haq ka janda hai..,. mare gale main phansi ka phanda hai... main moot se kab darta hoon.....main tu marne ki khater zinda hoon.... mare laho se suraj chamke ga ...tu bacha bacha bole ga.... main bagi hoon main baghi hoon jo chae kasam le lo

:comfort: aaram sey aaram itna baghi na kahein khud keh fauj aap ka ehtesaab karney aa jaey - waisey alfaaz achhey hain...

[Sadaf Aslam]

aitebar

us nay mujh say kaha tum ko mujh say kitna peyar hai
main nay kaha TARRON ka bhi koi shumar hai
us nay mujh say kaha k sath nibhao gay kab tluk
main nay kaha jub tluk SANSO ki taar hai
us nay mujh say kaha mujh ko yaqeen aye meger kase
main nay kaha k bunday k naam AITEBAR hai

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: aitebar

very nice waisy kaha kis ny?:mm:

[moomo]

Re: zindagi

waoooo

bas kerian itna baghi to na hoon

Allah khair kray ga ..........so nice write

[moomo]

Re: be happy

hi sadaf
kasi hoo

i m maria from multan

ap bohot acha likhti hoo
i like it

[Sadaf Aslam]

millna

woh milly tu na millon woh na milly tu milny ki justojoo keron
yeh mohabtoon k emtehan bhi hoa kerty hain ajeeb

[Sadaf Aslam]

Re: zindagi

assalam_o_alikum
aur thanx 4 compliment
hahahahhahaha
INSHALLAH main aenda acha likhny ki koshis keroon gi is tarh ka her giz nahi
SADAF ASLAM

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: millna

theek kaha nice choice