suno sathi!!

[Khushi]

suno sathi!!!
ghamon ki shakh per jab bhi phool khilney lagtay hain
meri bay khwab ankhen khoobsurat sapney bunti hain
suno hamdam!!!
kisi bay-naam si khahish ki sergoshi
udasi ki khunak raaton k sub nohey
chaman ki bay sabati ki sabhi qisey
merey dil ko ager ye muztarib ker den
tamana`on k aangen main merey dil ka lahoo bher den
TUMHAREY naam ki mish`al
sada roshan bhi rehti hay
baharen muskurati hain
khizan dam torr deti hay
tumharey pyar k roshan diye ki lo
merey dil ka dareecha khole deti hay

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: suno sathi!!

wah gee wah................pasand aai..............

[Khushi]

Re: suno sathi!!

bhot shukria :)

[shy]

Re: suno sathi!!

bohat khubsurat poem he

[Khushi]

Re: suno sathi!!

thnkzzz Shy ji

[Z.]

Re: suno sathi!!

achi nazm hai Khushi

if you dont mind me asking...."Karwey Gulab" kaisey hotey hein?? :)

[*Rida*]

Re: suno sathi!!

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht khobsorat poem hai Khushi ...u ki tarah :wk:

[Khushi]

Re: suno sathi!!

achi nazm hai Khushi

if you dont mind me asking...."Karwey Gulab" kaisey hotey hein?? :)

thnkzz Xenya ji.. :)
aur y should I mind?? :)
wese Karrwey Gulabon ko define kerna kuch esay tou nahi hai but one can say k bhikher aur murjhaii huwe Gulabon ka zaiqa kerrwa hota hai.

[Khushi]

Re: suno sathi!!

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht khobsorat poem hai Khushi ...u ki tarah :wk:

thnkzz Rida dear.. so nice of U... do u know that U are sho Shweet :phool:

[seeker]

Re: suno sathi!!

nice poetry!

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: suno sathi!!

very very nice