Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

[Brijinder]

Abhi hai bahut raat jwaN
Abhi bahut hai subh-o-shub ke faaslay
Abhi neeNd kahaN abhi chain kahaN
Abhi to chalyN haiN yaadoN ke kafelay

Abhi kuch keh to leN kuch sun to leiN
Kuch dard ki kaliyaN chun to leiN
Abhi dil zara behak to ley
Abhi shub zara mehak to ley
Abhi meye kaisailee lagti hai
Abhi chandni mailee lagti hai
Abhi mahOl-i-sukhan bun to ley
Anjuman zara jum to ley
Abhi shub kahaN abhi shaam hai
Abhi khud ka hameiN ilhaam hai

Abhi sukhan meiN vo nashaa nahiN
Koi she'r peer-e-mugaN nahiN
Abhi dard ne ki hai ibtada
Abhi "Sagar" ne kuch kahaa nahiN

Abhi na jao meri jaaN
Abhi hai bahut raat jawaaN

[Yaaram]

Re: Abhi Na Jao meri JaaN

Bohat KHoooooooooob :)

[Masood]

Re: Abhi Na Jao meri JaaN

Abhi hai bahut raat jwaN
Abhi bahut hai subh-o-shub ke faaslay
Abhi neeNd kahaN abhi chain kahaN
Abhi to chalyN haiN yaadoN ke kafelay

Abhi kuch keh to leN kuch sun to leiN
Kuch dard ki kaliyaN chun to leiN
Abhi dil zara behak to ley
Abhi shub zara mehak to ley
Abhi meye kaisailee lagti hai
Abhi chandni mailee lagti hai
Abhi mahOl-i-sukhan bun to ley
Anjuman zara jum to ley
Abhi shub kahaN abhi shaam hai
Abhi khud ka hameiN ilhaam hai

Abhi sukhan meiN vo nashaa nahiN
Koi she'r peer-e-mugaN nahiN
Abhi dard ne ki hai ibtada
Abhi "Sagar" ne kuch kahaa nahiN

Abhi na jao meri jaaN
Abhi hai bahut raat jawaaN

Brilliant - bohat umdah nazam hai, I really liked it :) Khush rahein

[La'hasil]

Re: Abhi Na Jao meri JaaN

BUhat achay


thanx for Sharing :rose


khush rahyeah :rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Abhi Na Jao meri JaaN

Nazm pasand aayee,yehi iska haasil hai.Sukriya,meharbaani
Brijinder"Sagar"

[Brijinder]

Khyaal Se Qalm Tak

KHYAAL SE QALM TAK

Yeh geet bus khabar bhar haiN
Meray zehan main uthtay gubaaroN ki
Khwaab main jinpay apnay sajaataa huiN

Alfaaz mahaz wo keelaiN hain deewaaroN ki
Ik koshish hai haasil ko byaaN karnay ki
Ik diwaangi khalaa ko bhrnay ki
Shaayri sirf souq nahi ab zaroorat hai bani

Khyaal say qalam tak kay safar main
Muqammal ka koi da_awa to nahi
Yeh afqaar meray hain magar
Meray dil ka aainaa to nahi

Magar kuch to hai jissay ho ayaaN
Meri duniyaa kay khwaab
Meri tanhaai meray ahad meray ahsaas
Aur yehi bahut hai mujhko fan-e-sukhan ka haasil
Aur isliyay hi bus main likhta rahuNga

----------- Brijinder "Sagar"
Auckland,New Zealand

[Yaaram]

Re: Khyaal Se Qalm Tak

Very nice bhai aap qwaed-0-Zawabat bhi parh lein aik baar

[Brijinder]

Re: Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

Bhai Yaarum,
I am sorry that i can not read persian script.So can you plz let me know what is in that so that I take care of it?
Regards
Brijinder"Sagar"

[Yaaram]

Re: Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

no it is not persian it is urdu

['SamRazi']

Re: Abhi Na Jao meri JaaN

Abhi hai bahut raat jwaN
Abhi bahut hai subh-o-shub ke faaslay
Abhi neeNd kahaN abhi chain kahaN
Abhi to chalyN haiN yaadoN ke kafelay

Abhi kuch keh to leN kuch sun to leiN
Kuch dard ki kaliyaN chun to leiN
Abhi dil zara behak to ley
Abhi shub zara mehak to ley
Abhi meye kaisailee lagti hai
Abhi chandni mailee lagti hai
Abhi mahOl-i-sukhan bun to ley
Anjuman zara jum to ley
Abhi shub kahaN abhi shaam hai
Abhi khud ka hameiN ilhaam hai

Abhi sukhan meiN vo nashaa nahiN
Koi she'r peer-e-mugaN nahiN
Abhi dard ne ki hai ibtada
Abhi "Sagar" ne kuch kahaa nahiN

Abhi na jao meri jaaN
Abhi hai bahut raat jawaaN

Buhut khoob Brijinder jee :rose ,


kya yeh aap ki apnilikhi huwi hai.... :cc:

['SamRazi']

Re: Khyaal Se Qalm Tak

KHYAAL SE QALM TAK


Magar kuch to hai jissay ho ayaaN
Meri duniyaa kay khwaab
Meri tanhaai meray ahad meray ahsaas
Aur yehi bahut hai mujhko fan-e-sukhan ka haasil
Aur isliyay hi bus main likhta rahuNga

Buhut achey Brijinder jee :rose


share kerne ke liyeh shukriya :)

[Brijinder]

Re: Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

Thanx a lot for the warm words of appreciation from all of you.Yes! it is written by me.But there are few so-called sentries of culture/litrature elsewhere who are after my blood as they don't consider it as a poetry.Hopefully I will not receive the same reception here.
Yaaraan bhai,I think the urdu is written in persian script as hindi is written in devnagri.Correct me if i am wrong,please.
The introduction of my work by Mr Khushwant Singh,historian,novelist n top most journalist of India can be viewed at ebazm.com/sagar
Brijinder"Sagar"

['SamRazi']

Re: Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

Well Brijinder jee, mei drust samjhi thi k yeh kalam aap ka apna hai. To Birinder is section mei hum apna intikhab' apni pasand post kertey hain. Jo log khudh itna acha likhtey hain aap ki tarah ous ko share kerne ke liyeh ek dosra section hai aur woh hai "Mei Shair To Nahi". Aainda aap apna zati kalam waha share kiya kijiyeh ga, ta key zada log ousey parh aur appreciate ker sakein :)


Khush rahiyeh :rose

[Brijinder]

Re: Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

Thanx Salma.I never claim that I am a good poet as I will always be learing .But i will definately post my works in section u suggested as I think it is for new poets.
Thanx once again
Brijinder"Sagar"

['SamRazi']

Re: Birjinder ka Intikhab..!!

Always Welcome :rose