Naqsh Ka Intikhaaab

[NaQsh]

Tum kis soch mein doob gaEee ho

Hath ka pathar

Pani kay seenay par maro

Chot to pani kay Aaye gee

Pani chot ki taab na lakar

Mojon ki sorat mein behta

Sahil sahil sar tapkega

Phir khud hee

Aslii halaat par aajaye ga

Tum kis soch mein doob gaEe ho

Hath ka pathar

pani kay seeney par maro

Main Pani Hoon!!


zubair rizwi

[NaQsh]

Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Main ne aik mudat tak
Tootey Phootey sheeshon mein
Apna aks dekha hai
Ankh,hont,galon ko
Mathey aur balon ko
Kirchey kirchey jora hai
Mein ne aik mudat tak
Sirf apna chehra hee
Aiinay mein dekha hai
Usko sanwara hai
Usko sajaya hai....

Zindagee safar tera
Kis jahan mein ley aya
Kis ne meree ankhon ko
Heraton mein dala hai
Poorey Qad ka AiiNa
Samney lagaya hai!!




Zubair Rizwi

[Hamsafar]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Great Yara
boaht sukria
aap ney bohat piyre poetry shiair kia hi

[annayah]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

bohat aala..keep sharing

[aik_lerki]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Bohat khoob :rose
Nice sharing

[aik_lerki]

Re: Paraya Ehsaas

Nice sharing NaQsh :rose

[Masood]

Re: Paraya Ehsaas

:) haan sach kaha hai shaair ney keh paani mein mudakhlat aaey to woh apni asli halat mein aa hi jata hai, jaisey aik zakhamkhordah insaan bar bar key zakhmon ko bhi seh hi jata hai..... Chehrey per muskurahat kabhi bhi is baat ki alamat nahin hoti keh dil mein zakhm nahin....

Naqsh achha intikhaab hai bohat pasand aaya..

[Masood]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Aaina to aks hota hai us zahiri khol ka jo uskey samney aaey magar kabhi kabar aainey key samney kharrey insaan ko apney batin ko bhi dekhna parrta hai keh woh kitna kirchi kirchi hai, kitna toota huwa hai, kitni ghayil hai, kitna doghla hai, woh kitna ba- ya bemurawwat hai... aaina to insaan ko bohat kuchh dikhata hai - magar insaan hi aankhein chura leta hai...

another nice piece of sharing... Khush rahiye.

[sheem]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

ahaan very nice sharing :x

[NaQsh]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Great Yara
boaht sukria
aap ney bohat piyre poetry shiair kia hi

Thanx for liking :)

[NaQsh]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Great Yara
boaht sukria
aap ney bohat piyre poetry shiair kia hi

bohat aala..keep sharing

thanx for liking

[NaQsh]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

Aaina to aks hota hai us zahiri khol ka jo uskey samney aaey magar kabhi kabar aainey key samney kharrey insaan ko apney batin ko bhi dekhna parrta hai keh woh kitna kirchi kirchi hai, kitna toota huwa hai, kitni ghayil hai, kitna doghla hai, woh kitna ba- ya bemurawwat hai... aaina to insaan ko bohat kuchh dikhata hai - magar insaan hi aankhein chura leta hai...

another nice piece of sharing... Khush rahiye.

Bohat khoob :rose
Nice sharing

ahaan very nice sharing :x

Thanx for liking and bohat shukria for commenting on your perspective Masood :rose Sahee kaha ke aaina insaan ko bohat kuch dikhata hai :rose

T

[NaQsh]

Re: Paraya Ehsaas

Nice sharing NaQsh :rose

:) haan sach kaha hai shaair ney keh paani mein mudakhlat aaey to woh apni asli halat mein aa hi jata hai, jaisey aik zakhamkhordah insaan bar bar key zakhmon ko bhi seh hi jata hai..... Chehrey per muskurahat kabhi bhi is baat ki alamat nahin hoti keh dil mein zakhm nahin....

Naqsh achha intikhaab hai bohat pasand aaya..

thankyou aik_lerki and thankyou masood for your nice comments and intikhaab pasand karne ka
:rose

[maha]

Re: Paraya Ehsaas

nice

[maha]

Re: Poorey Qad Ka AaiNa

good one