Woh!!!!

[fari]

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose
main aiyna tha, woh maira khayal rakhti thi
main toot-ta tha to chun kar sambhal rakhti thi

har aik maslay ka hal nikal rakhti thi,
zaheen thi mujhay hairat main daal rakhti thi

main jab bhi tark-e-taluq ki baat karta tha
woh rokti thi mujhay, kal pay taal rakhti thi

bas aik woh thi jisay ghaow main dikhata tha
bas aik woh thi keh jo andmal rakhti thi

woh mairay dard ko chunnti thi apni pooron say
woh mairay wastay khud ko nidhal rakhti thi

woh dobnay nahi daiti thi dukh kay darya main
mairay wajood ki naow uchaal rakhti thi

duain us ki balaon ko rook laiti thin
woh mairay chaar soo hathon ki dhaal rakhti thi

ik aisi dhun kay nahi phir kabhi main nay suni
woh munfarid sa hansi main kamal rakhti thi

usay nadamatain mairi kahan gawara thin
woh mairay wastay asaan sawal rakhti thi

bichar kay uss say main dunya ki thokaron main hon
woh pass thi tau mujhay lazawaal rakhti thi

sahar tha naam , ujalay ghulam thay us kay
woh zindagi kay andhairay ujaal rakhti thi

woh muntazir mera rehti thi dhoop main shaid
main laut-ta tha to chaon nikal rakhti thi

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

[Baad-e-Saba]

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woh muntazir mera rehti thi dhoop main shaid
main laut-ta tha to chaon nikal rakhti thi

buhat khooob :rose

[Yaaram]

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Achi sharing ki hay :)

[fari]

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:phool: pasand karnay ka shukriya Saba jee:phool: aur Yaram baba jee:hathora

[Khushi]

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nice poem Fari

[Madiha kanwal]

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bohut achi sharing hai Fari lekin me k paas kuch aesi hai

main aiyna thi, woh maira khayal rakhta tha
main toot-ti thi to chun kar sambhal rakhta tha
:cc:

[fari]

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bohut achi sharing hai Fari lekin me k paas kuch aesi hai

main aiyna thi, woh maira khayal rakhta tha
main toot-ti thi to chun kar sambhal rakhta tha
:cc:

Acha per meray pass asi hi ha:embarasse purani ha:donno:
per app apni wali bhi post karo na??:phool: woh mujhay zayda achi lag rhi ha:lpop: :lpop:

[Wafa]

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beautiful ghazal ........nice sharing fari...:rose

[fari]

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beautiful ghazal ........nice sharing fari...:rose

Thank you Dearooooooooooooo:salam: :rose Atlast hum dono online hain aik waqt per

[Madiha kanwal]

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Acha per meray pass asi hi ha:embarasse purani ha:donno:
per app apni wali bhi post karo na??:phool: woh mujhay zayda achi lag rhi ha:lpop: :lpop:

ye rahi meri wali

Main aaina thi, woh mera khayaal rakhta tha
Main toot-ti thi tau chun kar sanmbhal rakhta tha

Harr ek masley ka hal nikaal rakhta tha
Zaheen tha, mujhe hairat mein daal rakhta tha

Main jab bhi tark-e-talluq ki baat karti thi
woh rokta tha mujhe, kal pe taal rakhta tha

Woh mere dard ko chunnta tha apni palkon se
Woh mere wastey khud ko nidhaal rakhta tha..

Woh doobney nahi deta tha dukh ke darya mein
Mere wajood ki naaow uchaal rakhta tha

Duaaein uss ki, balaaon ko roak laiti thin
Woh mere chaar soo hathon ki dhaal rakhta tha

Ik aisi dhunn k nahi phir kabhi main ne suni
Woh munfarid sa hansi mein kamaal rakhta tha

Ussey nidamatain meri kahan gawaara thin
Woh mere wastey aasaan sawaal rakhta tha

Bichar k uss se main dunya ki thokaron mein hoon
Woh pass tha tau mujhe laazawaal rakhta tha

Sehar tha naam , ujaalay ghulam they uss k
Woh zindagi k andhairey ujaal rakhta tha

Woh muntazir mera rehta tha dhoop mein shayed
Main laut-ti thi tau chaaon nikaal rakhta tha..

[aik_lerki]

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beautiFul
Thankx 4 sharing

[fari]

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ye rahi meri wali

Main aaina thi, woh mera khayaal rakhta tha
Main toot-ti thi tau chun kar sanmbhal rakhta tha

Harr ek masley ka hal nikaal rakhta tha
Zaheen tha, mujhe hairat mein daal rakhta tha

Main jab bhi tark-e-talluq ki baat karti thi
woh rokta tha mujhe, kal pe taal rakhta tha

Woh mere dard ko chunnta tha apni palkon se
Woh mere wastey khud ko nidhaal rakhta tha..

Woh doobney nahi deta tha dukh ke darya mein
Mere wajood ki naaow uchaal rakhta tha

Duaaein uss ki, balaaon ko roak laiti thin
Woh mere chaar soo hathon ki dhaal rakhta tha

Ik aisi dhunn k nahi phir kabhi main ne suni
Woh munfarid sa hansi mein kamaal rakhta tha

Ussey nidamatain meri kahan gawaara thin
Woh mere wastey aasaan sawaal rakhta tha

Bichar k uss se main dunya ki thokaron mein hoon
Woh pass tha tau mujhe laazawaal rakhta tha

Sehar tha naam , ujaalay ghulam they uss k
Woh zindagi k andhairey ujaal rakhta tha

Woh muntazir mera rehta tha dhoop mein shayed
Main laut-ti thi tau chaaon nikaal rakhta tha..

ahaaaaaaaa nice Madiha jee

[fari]

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thank you Aik lerki jee

[Daood]

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Wah