~Mere Pasand~

[Kaanch Ki Maina]

Asalam-o-Alaikum :salam:

Yahan main apni pasand ki poetry share karon gee hopefully aap sab ko pasand aaye gee ... Agar aap log bhi iss mein koch share karain gay to dili khoshi ho gee :)

So here is my 1st post :)

Agar ansoo baha deta too us ke pass kia rehta.....?
woh muj ko hoosla deta too us ke pass kia rehta...?

nishan muj ko nahi milta koi us tak pohachnay ka
muje apna pata deta too us ke pass kia rehta...?

woh iss man main tha kay jiss kay dam per ab woh zinda hai
main us ka dil dukha deta too us kay pass kia rehta...?

musafir saray hii phaal(fruit) kha kay apni rah chal daitay
shajar tehni jhuka deta too us ke pass kia rehta....?

meri yaadon nay hii ab tak usay abaad rakha hai
woh muj ko bhi bhula deta too us k pass kia rehta..... ?

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: ~Mere Pasand~

meri yaadon nay hii ab tak usay abaad rakha hai
woh muj ko bhi bhula deta too us k pass kia rehta..... ?



Asslaam_O_Alikum WR WB :salam:

Bhot umda ! Bahtreen intikhab hay u ka Great khushi hui me INSHALAH is ko compose karu? agr ijazat ho ? :cc: :embarasse

FeaamNAllah:lpop: :lpop:

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~Mere Pasand~

Bohat zabardast pasand hai ap ki maina :phool:
thankx 4 sharing :)

[Kaanch Ki Maina]

Re: ~Mere Pasand~

Walaikum Assalam :salam:

Bohat Bohat Shokriya :) :rose :)

Bheegi-Palkain :) :rose

Aik_lerki :) :rose


Palkain aap jo chahain karain i won't mind ever :)

Next time sa aap jab chahain compose kar lia karain permission ki kia zaroorat hai dear free free :)

[Kaanch Ki Maina]

Re: ~Mere Pasand~

Ajj dereachea main wo ana bhol gaya
main bhi apna diya jalana bhol gaya

Ajj mujhe bhi us ki yaad nahin ayi
wo bhi mere khwab main ana bhol gaya

khat likha hai lekin khat k konea per
wo apni ankh k ansoo mitana bhol gaya

roth k ik jaga per dono bethe rahea
main us ko wo mujh ko manana bhol gaya

bahar ne jab se ana chor diya
mousam bhi apne phool khilana bhol gaya

chalte chalte main us ko gher le aya
wo bhe mujh se apna hath churana bhol gaya

[Mengal]

Re: ~Mere Pasand~

Very Nice Bohth Khoob,............