).....PoOrA hAi ChAnD..... (

[WASI ANJUM]

mujhe ye kabhi nazam lag raha tha....to kabhi shair
magr mene nazam mein post kiya hai:)

[*Rida*]

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Assalam-0-Alaikom
hmmm...acha hai .....Nazm mein hi sahi hai

[WASI ANJUM]

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Walekum Asslam


thanx rida jee

[khananiz]

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buhat khoob wasi...........:thmbup:

[WASI ANJUM]

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thanx janab

[Gul]

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Hai tu yeh Sher ...:) agar qafiya radeef deykhi ja-ay tu
Mgar Jiss andaz se aap nay parhaa samjha ....Ossi tarah likha.....
So NAzm ka roop b acha hai ..
Nice Sharing !

[aik lerki paaloo se]

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bohat khoobsurat wasi achi choice hai

[WASI ANJUM]

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Hai tu yeh Sher ...:) agar qafiya radeef deykhi ja-ay tu
Mgar Jiss andaz se aap nay parhaa samjha ....Ossi tarah likha.....
So NAzm ka roop b acha hai ..
Nice Sharing !

thanx Gul
mujhe bhi shair he laga tha...magr sath sath nazam bhi laga:)

[WASI ANJUM]

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bohat khoobsurat wasi achi choice hai

thankss aik lark......!i:)

[sarfraz_qamar]

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bohhtt hee nice janab

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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buhat zaberdast:rose :rose

[Mani16]

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Great work bhai jaan

[WASI ANJUM]

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bohhtt hee nice janab

thanx sarfraz qamar :)

[WASI ANJUM]

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buhat zaberdast:rose :rose

thankss shakh-e-Tamana:)

[WASI ANJUM]

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Great work bhai jaan

thanx mani:)