*Na mila to baas tu na mila *

[Wafa]

:)

[fari]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

very nice one Wafa

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

Very WellDone Wafa Dear :clap: bohat umdah :)

Lekin ye 4th line mein word "Maanga" mein do aankhon waali Hey nahin aaey gee

[Muhammad Khalil]

Buhat hee behtreen

[Wafa]

*Na mila to baas tu na mila *

:)

[ummid]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

sad poetry with nice composition...:clap:
beautiful dear...:)
khush rahiye.:rose

[Wafa]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

sad poetry with nice composition...:clap:
beautiful dear...:)
khush rahiye.:rose

thanks dear for liking....:D: tum bhi hamesha khush rahoo.....:rose

[*Rida*]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
beautiful border:clap:.......beautiful image:clap:........beautiful composition:clap:.......sad poetry wid 1 urdu mistakes......:)
noon + alif = wrong
noon + hay (hathi wala) = right

use dots " . "instaed of dash" - ".....or use comma " , "

ummm...... mujhay yaqeen hai mind nahin karo gi:phool:

[Wafa]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
beautiful border:clap:.......beautiful image:clap:........beautiful composition:clap:.......sad poetry wid 1 urdu mistakes......:)
noon + alif = wrong
noon + hay (hathi wala) = right

use dots " . "instaed of dash" - ".....or use comma " , "

ummm...... mujhay yaqeen hai mind nahin karo gi:phool:

thanks rida sooo much for liking..........:phool:
aur suggestions ke lea bhi thanks dear.......:D:

[Masood]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

Wafa kaha nahin urdu ki imla check kerwaa liya karo :p :p :p

Bohat umdah :)

[Wafa]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

Wafa kaha nahin urdu ki imla check kerwaa liya karo :p :p :p

Bohat umdah :)

mughe laga ke theek hai lekin pher bhi mistakes ho gae......:D :lpop:
thanks masood ji for liking.....:rose

[harf aashna]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

Vo Jo Mil Gaya Usse Yaad Rakh
Jo Nahi Mila Usse Bhool Jaa

[seeker]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

its nice!

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

zabardast poem

[Madiha kanwal]

Re: *Na mila to baas tu na mila *

wow yaar itni zaberdast designing ki hai
haey kaash hum bhi ker saktey
:D