~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

[Wafa]

:)

[alone_zaine]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

really verry nice shering keep it up

<(__I__)I bless u

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

WAfa aap to har fan molaa hein

buhat hi achhii sharing hey
thanks

[Aania]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

line 1:aaina "hooon" main hota hai ... wafa ji .
line 4 "utha" hota hai uta nahen
.line 8 "hoon". noon missing hai yehan bhi
line 9 "dooon" hota hai ... noon ki kami hai
last line : aaooon main noon hota hai end pe wo kami hai :)
hope u wont mind :)
khush rahye .. work is quite better

[*Rida*]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~


Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose


buht khobsorat ....buht zabardast composing hai :phool:
buht zyada improve kar rahi hain aaap :masha
jald hi yeh urdu ki choti choti mistakes bhi sahih ho jaen gi :D:

[Wafa]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

Thank u soo much alone-zaine and baad e saba........:rose

[Wafa]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

line 1:aaina "hooon" main hota hai ... wafa ji .
line 4 "utha" hota hai uta nahen
.line 8 "hoon". noon missing hai yehan bhi
line 9 "dooon" hota hai ... noon ki kami hai
last line : aaooon main noon hota hai end pe wo kami hai :)
hope u wont mind :)
khush rahye .. work is quite better

Thanks Aania for telling me ......i have done the corrections..:lpop:
be happy and thanks for liking...:rose

[Wafa]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose


buht khobsorat ....buht zabardast composing hai :phool:
buht zyada improve kar rahi hain aaap :masha
jald hi yeh urdu ki choti choti mistakes bhi sahih ho jaen gi :D:

Thanks dear sooooo much for appreciation
Aap logo ke saath reh kar urdu theek ho gae ge :insha: .......:D:

[Yaaram]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

Bohat umdah wafa :) ab aap pehle se kaafi behter designing kar leti hain :) keep designing dear :rose

[Wafa]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

Bohat umdah wafa :) ab aap pehle se kaafi behter designing kar leti hain :) keep designing dear :rose

Thank u sooo much........:salam:

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

very nice Wafa :phool:
Carry on :rose

[Aania]

Re: ~Saath nibha kar to dekho~

Thanks Aania for telling me ......i have done the corrections..:lpop:
be happy and thanks for liking...:rose

thnx .. be happy girl :)