~kia rakha hai~

[Wafa]

:)

[Yaaram]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Bohat khoob wafa :) achi sharing ki hay aapne :rose

[*Rida*]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardast ....ashaar ...composing aur image sab buht acha hai
keep it up :phool:

[mahek]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

bahot khoob

[Wafa]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

bahot Khoob Wafaa...kuchh GhalatiyaaN haiN kitaabat meN...plz tasHeeH kar leN.

agar aaKhirii she'r yuN hotaa to kaisa rahtaa:

haathoN kii chand uljhii sii lakeeroN meN kia rakkhaa hai

shukriya jhumroo pasand karne ke lea.....
sheir jaisa tha waise hi likha hai, lekin jo aap ne bataya hai wo bhi theek hai....:)

[Wafa]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Bohat khoob wafa :) achi sharing ki hay aapne :rose

Thank u soo much Yaaram for liking...:)

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardast ....ashaar ...composing aur image sab buht acha hai
keep it up :phool:

thanks dear for liking.....:phool:

bahot khoob

bohot bohot shuriya mahek....:rose

[ASAD]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

nice

[Wafa]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Thanks Asad for liking......:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Buhat hee behtreen koshash

[Nav]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Wah bhoat khoob wafa bhoat umda sher.....La-jawab....Bhoat pasand aaiya..:rose

[zeeshan]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

nice sharing & composing :)

['SamRazi']

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

very nice dear :thmbup:

[Wafa]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

bohot bohot shuriya khalil, nav, zeeshan and saima......:)

[Masood]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Very nice wafa - magar mujhey lagta hai keh

ishq muhabbat batein hain, batein mein kya rakha hai - saheeh nahin:

ishq muhabbat batein hain, BATON mein kya rakha hai - theek ho ga :)

[Wafa]

Re: ~kia rakha hai~

Very nice wafa - magar mujhey lagta hai keh

ishq muhabbat batein hain, batein mein kya rakha hai - saheeh nahin:

ishq muhabbat batein hain, BATON mein kya rakha hai - theek ho ga :)

Thanks masood ji.........:phool:
Aap ne theek kaha ,me ne ghalat likha tha aur theek bhi kar dia....:D: