mere liye...

[ummid]

Asalamaalaikum..

[Masood]

Re: mere liye...

main samundar ki tarha khamosh bethoon muntazir
tu chaley kohsar sey phir masl-e-aab ju merey liyey
main hawa key dosh per urr jaoun rishtey torr ker
shehar mein ho tu pareshan ku-baku merey liyey

hamesha ki tarha bohat umdah bohat aala pasand key saath boha tachha kaam kiya hai beta ji - khush raho ...

[ummid]

Re: mere liye...

main samundar ki tarha khamosh bethoon muntazir
tu chaley kohsar sey phir masl-e-aab ju merey liyey
main hawa key dosh per urr jaoun rishtey torr ker
shehar mein ho tu pareshan ku-baku merey liyey

hamesha ki tarha bohat umdah bohat aala pasand key saath boha tachha kaam kiya hai beta ji - khush raho ...

thankooo very very much... hume yaqeen tha ke aap ko zaror pasnd aaygi yeh ghazal..:)

[miss sng]

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aweasom
geat work UMMId sis:thmbup:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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ahan , ahan humaree pasandeeda ghazlon mein se hay ye ..:)

boht umdah, bohat khoob dear :rose

[ShehzadJee]

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marvellous ummid jee :)

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht buht ala....:ff:

[seeker]

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Umdaah Bohat Umdaah!
Be Happy :)

[shakeeel]

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Kaya baat hai jee, aap to cha gayin....bohat khoobsoorat, bohat umda

[*Hala*]

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haa.. zabardshtttttttttttt Ummid jani buht khubusrat intikhab hai ap ka ...be happy:rose

[Madiha kanwal]

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greatt work :phool: