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Asalamaalaikum.... :)
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wow..dear bohot he ache designing ke hai
....aur nazam bhi bohot pasand aae...:eye:
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nice one de
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bohat khoobsurat nazam hai ummid.
ek choti si mistake hai lekin chaley gi.
keep sharing ....
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bohat khubsurat poem heComment
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Bohat khoobusra aik aik satar mein kamaal hai aur aap ney bohat umdah dhang sey pesh ki hai - jeeti raho betatumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lageyComment
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buhut kihoob dear .................. magar itni sad poem kiu :hhh:sigpicComment
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hum ne sahi nahi karni ab..Originally posted by shakeeel View Postbohat khoobsurat nazam hai ummid.
ek choti si mistake hai lekin chaley gi.
keep sharing ....
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Ummid .. maja nahen aayaa .. Image bohat kheench ke lengthy kia .. is se better hai I think .. jo image kaam ke hain .. unhen certain points pe new layers mien paste kero aur bg kuj milta julta but nice rakho .. neat feel ho gaa :)Originally posted by ummid View PostComment
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buht hi khobsorat kaam hai....kalaam ki kia tareef karon....:roseOriginally posted by ummid View Posthum ne sahi nahi karni ab..
aur haan sahih nahin karain lakin likhna seekh lain:)
yeh ghalti aap kai martaba kar chuki hain.....
tay + 2 chashmi hay + hathi wala hay +ray + noon + alif
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Looking Nice :)
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Asalaam-o-Alaikum!
Intekhab to bay had khubsurat hai aur kaam b acha kia hai :) 10th line main lafz 'taaveel' nahi balkay 'tahveel' ho ga.............'taaveel' kay maani bahana gharnay kay hotey hain jab kay yahan lafz 'tahveel' istemal kiya gaya hai jis ka matlab 'qaid' hona hai. Is hisab say mujhaye 'taveel' dusrust nahi lag raha :(Mainda Ziker Vi Tu'n, Mainda Fiker Vi Tu'nMainda Zoaq Vi Tu'n, Vajdaan Vi Tu'nMainda Aval, Akhir, Ander, BahirZahir Tey Pinha'an Vi Tu'nMainda Bakht Tey, Naam Nishan Vi Tu'nComment
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Bohot khoob umeed ji.....Comment
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