"tumhe sub yaad karte hain"

[ummid]

Aslamaalaikum..
aik aur poem "DECEMBER" per... per is mein aik word "dhondhly" galat ho gaya hai.. woh saari fiels del karne ke baad hume nazar aaya... sorry..
any wayzz humesha ki tarah aap ke comments ka intezar rahe ga..
khush rahiye..:rose
Allah haafiz:)

[*Rida*]

Re: "tumhe sub yaad karte hain"

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

completely beautiful......superb

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: "tumhe sub yaad karte hain"

wha gee waha buhat ala kaam kia hay aap ny

[ummid]

Re: "tumhe sub yaad karte hain"

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

completely beautiful......superb

waalaikumasalam...
shukriya...:blush:
khush rahiye..:rose

[ummid]

Re: "tumhe sub yaad karte hain"

wha gee waha buhat ala kaam kia hay aap ny

shukriya khalil bhai...:blush:
khush rahiye..:phool:

[Madiha kanwal]

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khoobsurat nazm + composing

[ummid]

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khoobsurat nazm + composing

shukriya madiha ji..:blush:

[seeker]

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:) ahaan... "Tumhein sab yaad karte hain"

so nice poetry & also design. :rose

:masha

[Wafa]

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bohot he cute designing aur nazam bhi...:rose

[ummid]

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shukriya wafa aur seeker ji...
khush rahiye..:rose