tufaan ki ada...

[ummid]

Asalamaalaikum... :)
aik aur shair design kiya hai.. again one of my fav:blush: .... ummid hai pasnd aayega... humesha ki taraf comments kijye aur koi mistake ho tu batiye...
khush rahiye..:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

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Buhat ala

[fari]

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Great composing !!!

[ummid]

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Buhat ala

thankooo..

[ummid]

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Great composing !!!

shukriya fari pari..:rose

[Masood]

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Sahil tak aa geya mujhey dhoondhtey dhoondhtey ...

shair ka itikhaab hamesha ki tarha bohat umdah hai Ummid aur designing mein jo nikhaar aa chuka hai woh nazar aata hai - bohat umdah kaam karney lagi ho beta keep it up :)

[ummid]

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Sahil tak aa geya mujhey dhoondhtey dhoondhtey ...

shair ka itikhaab hamesha ki tarha bohat umdah hai Ummid aur designing mein jo nikhaar aa chuka hai woh nazar aata hai - bohat umdah kaam karney lagi ho beta keep it up :)

tahnk you soooooooooooooooooooooooo much bhai.:blush:..
khush rahiye..:rose

[Gul]

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Asalamaalaikum... :)
aik aur shair design kiya hai.. again one of my fav:blush: .... ummid hai pasnd aayega... humesha ki taraf comments kijye aur koi mistake ho tu batiye...
khush rahiye..:rose

Buhat Khoobsoorat sher Ummid jee....Aas aur nirash ki adaa-ein sabhi LEHROUn ko maloom hein..:eye: .aur aap Onn ko express karnay mein kafi expert lag rahee hein :) thanx for sharing

[ummid]

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Buhat Khoobsoorat sher Ummid jee....Aas aur nirash ki adaa-ein sabhi LEHROUn ko maloom hein..:eye: .aur aap Onn ko express karnay mein kafi expert lag rahee hein :) thanx for sharing

bauaht shukriya gul ji...:phool:
khush rahiye humesha...:rose

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Adaab !!!

Bohat umdah, boht khoob chanda ,:)
sh'r ka intekhab humesha ki terha boht zaberdast hay :thmbup:
aur us per aapki designing bhi :masha bht khoob
Khush rahieey :phool:

[ShehzadJee]

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Very Nice Ummid Jee:)

[ummid]

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Adaab !!!

Bohat umdah, boht khoob chanda ,:)
sh'r ka intekhab humesha ki terha boht zaberdast hay :thmbup:
aur us per aapki designing bhi :masha bht khoob
Khush rahieey :phool:

tasleem..
shukriya esha ji... :rose
aap bhi khush rahiye..:blush:

[ummid]

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Very Nice Ummid Jee:)

thank you very much..:)

[*Hala*]

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hmm.. buht khoob ummid jaani.... khush rahoo:phool:

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alikom:rose

image.......shair........compostiiton.....sabhi kuch buht umda:D: