***Aik sher***

[*Rida*]

Assalaam-0-Aliakom:rose
Wasi shah ka aik sher

[ADNAN.S]

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bohat aacha sher hai lekin pic kuch khaas nahin hai......

[Bheegi-Palkain]

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Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[*Rida*]

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bohat aacha sher hai lekin pic kuch khaas nahin hai......

Aaalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

tareef ka shukriyaa
yeh tu main pehlay hi bata chuki hoon mujhay image milti hi kahan hain
main tu bus sher sunanay kay liye aati hon :lpop:

[*Rida*]

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Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht shukriya

[*Rida*]

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haaaaaaaayeeeeeeeeeeeee Allah Ridaa...kia tumhaaraa ONE-TRACK mind hai? :lol :lol :lol are kaam kaaj ghar kaa karte karte bhi to yaad kar saktii ho...kia:

yaad e maazii kia 'azaab hai Rida?
kia kisi ne Haafiza chheen liyaa?

:lol :lol :lol

mazaaq bar-taraf...magar is laRkii kii umr kuchh ziyaada hii lagtii hai aise ash'aar ke liye :lol :lol :lol

Assalaam-0-Alaikom

aap ka tarz-e takhatub .......

kia matlab hai aap ka one track mind say....

ALLAH ka shukar hai maira hafzaa buht acha hai or ALLAH karay acha hi rehay aaameen...:dua

koi umar zyada nahin hai ... aap nay sab ko apni tarah samjha howa hai kiaaaaaaa.....:P

[shakeeel]

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Salam.........
acha hai......keep trying, you can improve, i am sure

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

thanx Shakeel

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom

kia kaha hai aap nay
"khaaroon" kia hota hai

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

:zubaan:

aap apni thopri bhaij dijiyeee