~~Makafat-e-Amal~~

[*Rida*]

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
aik haqeeqat.....:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

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really buhat hee behtreen...........

shaid hum loag es k bary main janty nahi hay...
yehan dunia main her wakat adal hu raha hay. ager hum kisi kee koi chez ly laity hain to wo hum sy kisi na kisi tareeky sy nikal hee jati hay.
aur jo humain milni huti hay wo bee mil jati hay...
kainat tawazan chahti hay ....

[ummid]

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waalaikumasalam
:) nice work..
aur shair bauhat sahi hai...
khush rahiye..:rose

[*Rida*]

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really buhat hee behtreen...........

shaid hum loag es k bary main janty nahi hay...
yehan dunia main her wakat adal hu raha hay. ager hum kisi kee koi chez ly laity hain to wo hum sy kisi na kisi tareeky sy nikal hee jati hay.
aur jo humain milni huti hay wo bee mil jati hay...
kainat tawazan chahti hay ....

mujahy is shair ...ya makafat-e-amal per mukammal yaqeen hai......yeh dunya aisay loagoon say bhari hoi hai...zuroori nahin koi bari saza hi dekhain.......
ALLAH TALAA humaray chotay say chotay kharab amal ki bhi pakar karta hai....chahya woh humari kisi kay baray mein buri soch hi kiun na ho...
ALLAH sab ko hidayat day.........aur yeh samajhnay ki taufeeq keh is dunya mein humesha nahin rehna.......insaan jo karay ga usay bhugatna bhi paray gaa......

[*Rida*]

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waalaikumasalam
:) nice work..
aur shair bauhat sahi hai...
khush rahiye..:rose

buht shukriyaaaa

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~~Makafat-e-Amal~~

mujahy is shair ...ya makafat-e-amal per mukammal yaqeen hai......yeh dunya aisay loagoon say bhari hoi hai...zuroori nahin koi bari saza hi dekhain.......
ALLAH TALAA humaray chotay say chotay kharab amal ki bhi pakar karta hai....chahya woh humari kisi kay baray mein buri soch hi kiun na ho...
ALLAH sab ko hidayat day.........aur yeh samajhnay ki taufeeq keh is dunya mein humesha nahin rehna.......insaan jo karay ga usay bhugatna bhi paray gaa......

:salam:

[Wafa]

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nice work aur shair to bohot acha hai...:rose

[*Rida*]

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buht shukriya...Wafa:)

[shakeeel]

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Very Very true , and very nice composing

[Madiha kanwal]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
aik haqeeqat.....:)

Walekum Assalam
bilkul sahi kaha yehi tu zindagi ki haqeqat hai k hum jab kisi k sath bura kertey hain ya sochtey bhi hain tu hamen phele duniya mein or us k baad rooz e mehsher mein us ka hisaab dena perta hai lekin is baat ko boht kam log samajh patey hain ..
v. nice :rose

[*Rida*]

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Very Very true , and very nice composing

thank u shooo much:blush:

[*Rida*]

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Walekum Assalam
bilkul sahi kaha yehi tu zindagi ki haqeqat hai k hum jab kisi k sath bura kertey hain ya sochtey bhi hain tu hamen phele duniya mein or us k baad rooz e mehsher mein us ka hisaab dena perta hai lekin is baat ko boht kam log samajh patey hain ..
v. nice :rose

:)
thanks......

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Aadaab!!!
Very Nice composing dear :rose

[Z.]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
aik haqeeqat.....:)

ws wr,

v true Rida (Y)

[seeker]

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100% Reality hai is Sherr mein!!
Good sharing!