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Assalaam-0-alaikom:rose
main nay yeh shair isi tarah perha hai.....
agar koi ghalti hai is mein tu aap laog bataen....
main nay yeh shair isi tarah perha hai.....
agar koi ghalti hai is mein tu aap laog bataen....
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haa!! Rida jani.. buht khoob shariy + composing....
be happy:roseu can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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thanks uu sooooooooooooo much Hala JaniComment
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very nice Rida
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very nice rida buhat khobsurat kaam kia hay aap ny...
aur pata nahi key wakee yeh muhabat ka matlab hay?Comment
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Asalamaalaikum
zabrdast... :clap:
bauaht khoob kaam kiya hai aap ne..
good ji..:thmbup: khush rahiye:phool:Comment
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bohot khoob.......:clap: :clap:sigpic
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Boht Khoob .......nice Composition And Poetry
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Wa Alaikum AsslamOriginally posted by Rida View PostAssalaam-0-alaikom:rose
main nay yeh shair isi tarah perha hai.....
agar koi ghalti hai is mein tu aap laog bataen....
bohat umdah dear , boht khoob ...as usual
lekin sh'r ki second line kuch yun hay
"khoon ban ker ragon mein uter gaya koi"sigpicComment
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Ji bacha isi ko muhabbat kaha geya hai - jab ko khoon ki tarha ragon mein utarta hai ...Originally posted by Rida View PostAssalaam-0-alaikom:rose
main nay yeh shair isi tarah perha hai.....
agar koi ghalti hai is mein tu aap laog bataen....
tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lageyComment
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Bohut umdah :)Mainda Ziker Vi Tu'n, Mainda Fiker Vi Tu'nMainda Zoaq Vi Tu'n, Vajdaan Vi Tu'nMainda Aval, Akhir, Ander, BahirZahir Tey Pinha'an Vi Tu'nMainda Bakht Tey, Naam Nishan Vi Tu'nComment
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nice dear keep it up
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~~~duaoon main dua yeah hay k bus mil jaein tujh ko he~~~~
~~~merey naseeb main likhi Khuda ney jo bhi khushiyan hon~~~Comment
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