~* Judaai ............*~

[*Rida*]

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
Aik shair.....

[fari]

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bohat khoob

['SamRazi']

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Shair + Designing ... too good dear :em:

[*Rida*]

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Fari Pari
Sam De
shukriyaaaaaaaa

[Aamir Ahmed]

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Hmmmm Nice bohot Khub

[*Rida*]

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thanks

[refreshing_breeze]

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walaikum assalam
excellent work jaani thmbup:

[Wafa]

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bohot khobusurat shair aur designing hai....:rose

[shakeeel]

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Aap ne bohat khoobsurti se design kiya hai is sher ko.
yeh sher aap ne qatil shifai ki jis ghaza se liya hai wo meri pasandida ghazal hai.
agar wafa pe bharosa rahe na dunya ko
to koi shakhs mohabbat ka haosla na kare

aap ne is sher mein sirf do alfaz ko aagey peechey kar diya hai.
yeh theek hai nahi marta koi judai main
khuda kisi ko kisi se magar juda na kare

muaaf karna , mein koi mistake dekhun to bataye bagher reh nahin sakta.

[*Rida*]

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is mein maafi wali kia baat hai bhai......hairat ki baat hai.....
aur ab main kia kahoon.....

Qatil Shifaai ko Khiraj-e-tehseen paish kia gaya thaa....PTV kay progrm mein Qateel Shifaai kay damaad nay yeh shair sunaya tha....aur main nay foran note kar lia thaaaa.......aur yahan per bhi share kar diyaa.....

[shakeeel]

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is mein maafi wali kia baat hai bhai......hairat ki baat hai.....
aur ab main kia kahoon.....

Qatil Shifaai ko Khiraj-e-tehseen paish kia gaya thaa....PTV kay progrm mein Qateel Shifaai kay damaad nay yeh shair sunaya tha....aur main nay foran note kar lia thaaaa.......aur yahan per bhi share kar diyaa.....

koi baat nahin, jaldi mein note kiya ho ga to aisi choti moti ghalti ho hi jati hai. muafi ka yeh soch kar likha tha k kahin aap yeh na sochen k mein to aap ki her post se ghaltian hi nikal raha hun.
keep sharing, aur aap neend ke mozoo par jo compitition shuru hua hai, us mein zaroor post karen, parveen shakir ke kafi ashaar hein neend par.un mein se koi design karen.

[*Rida*]

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right :salam:

[*Hala*]

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W.Salam
haa!! AMEEN... :)
super one Rida jani... be happy

[*Rida*]

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thanks Hala Jani :phool:

[khananiz]

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zabardast........:thmbup: