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    Assalaam-0-Alaikom




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    Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

    everything is fine except the text placing, if u are dividing a peom/ghazal in two columns better to highlight it with either a sign or by placing up/down cuz the way it is right now is kinda confusing, agar pehla column thora ooper aur doosra colum pehle colum k second k barabar hota tu parhne mein confusion na hoti
    Last edited by jugnoo217; 25 July 2006, 12:40.
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    • #3
      Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

      Veryyyy Beautiful Rida
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      • #4
        Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

        very nice rida......image bohot achi banaye hai.....:phool:
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        • #5
          Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

          Originally posted by jugnoo217
          everything is fine except the text placing, if u are dividing a peom/ghazal in two columns better to highlight it with either a sign or by placing up/down cuz the way it is right now is kinda confusing, agar pehla column thora ooper aur doosra colum pehle colum k second k barabar hota tu parhne mein confusion na hoti

          Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

          acha howa bata diyaa :p
          is say pehlay main aisa mention kar ti thi...lakin ab main nay socha keh PG members baray samjhdaar hain:D: .. aur misroon say bhisaaf zahir hai keh kon sa kis kay baad hai...:lpop:
          aainda sirf aap kay liye aisa kar lia karon gi :zuban:
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          • #6
            Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

            Originally posted by Ms.Khan
            Veryyyy Beautiful Rida
            Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

            thanks a million dear:phool:

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            • #7
              Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

              Originally posted by Wafa
              very nice rida......image bohot achi banaye hai.....:phool:
              Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

              thanks Wafa :phool::phool::phool:
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                Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

                Originally posted by Rida
                Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

                acha howa bata diyaa :p
                is say pehlay main aisa mention kar ti thi...lakin ab main nay socha keh PG members baray samjhdaar hain:D: .. aur misroon say bhisaaf zahir hai keh kon sa kis kay baad hai...:lpop:
                aainda sirf aap kay liye aisa kar lia karon gi :zuban:
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                • #9
                  Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

                  Originally posted by jugnoo217

                  Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

                  aap mujhay bataiye .....aap nay jo Ibn e Insha ki poem share ki hai us main aisa kuch likha hai
                  text oper neechay kar kay balance out nahin kar sakti....lakin aainda mention kar doon gi:lpop:
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                  • #10
                    Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

                    well, uss mein confusing nahi hai, keon k dono lines barabbar hain, aur ek hi sequence mein parhi jati hain jese:

                    tu kaha challe gaee thee tera be qarar inshaa

                    agar hum is nazm ko wese hi parhein tu yun ho jaye gee


                    muhabbat aisa naghama hai muhabbat aisa poda hai zara bhi jhol ho lay mein, tu tabb bhi sabz rehta hai :)

                    hope u got my point
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                    • #11
                      Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

                      Originally posted by jugnoo217
                      well, uss mein confusing nahi hai, keon k dono lines barabbar hain, aur ek hi sequence mein parhi jati hain jese:

                      tu kaha challe gaee thee tera be qarar inshaa

                      agar hum is nazm ko wese hi parhein tu yun ho jaye gee


                      muhabbat aisa naghama hai muhabbat aisa poda hai zara bhi jhol ho lay mein, tu tabb bhi sabz rehta hai :)


                      hope u got my point
                      Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

                      aap nay mention tu nahin kia naa halan keh perhnay walay aik column bhi perh saktay hain..... humari sawbdeed per hi chora tha naaa....:)

                      aur yehi baat aap bhi samjhaiye .....jaisay main nay pehlay bhi kaha tha...keh misroon say saaf zahir hai ....agar poday ka ziker ho gaya hai....tu zahir hai poday ki lay main tu jhool honay say raha :khi:
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                      • #12
                        Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

                        SO TU HAI, LEKEN HUM JESE DHOKA KHAA JATAY HAIN, HUM TO GARD KO GURDA SAMAJH LETE HAIN, AUR BHI KAI HONGAY HUM JESE:D

                        INSHA WALI NAZM JIS FORMAT MEIN TYPE HOOE HAI WO FORMAT CORRECT HAI KEON K TAVEEL NAZMEIN AISAY FORMAT MEIN HI HOTI HAIN, AUR WO MUKHTALIF PARAGRAPHS MEIN HAI, AAKHIR MEIN BAND HAI, PHIR DOOSRA PARAGRAPH:zuban:
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                        • #13
                          Re: **Muhabbat by Amjad Islam Amjad**

                          zabardast sharing Rida :)

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                            Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

                            Thanks Saba jee
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