*Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

[*Rida*]

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose




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[ummid]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

shair bauhat accha hai Rida ji......:thmbup:
aur second image hume zyada pasand aaya.....sweet and simple...:)
lakeen ager aap yahi shair kisi aur sad si image mein likhti tu shaid zyada accha lagta......(don't feel bad plzzz)...
khush rahiye..:phool:

[*Rida*]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose


pasand karnay ka shukriyaa Ummid

bad feel karnay ki baat nahin hai ...:)

sach bataaon tu mairi bhi samajh nahin aaraaha tha...aur dosri image nahin thi....
main dobara koshish karon gi :blush:

[ummid]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose


pasand karnay ka shukriyaa Ummid

bad feel karnay ki baat nahin hai ...:)

sach bataaon tu mairi bhi samajh nahin aaraaha tha...aur dosri image nahin thi....
main dobara koshish karon gi :blush:

Thankssssss....:)
hume laga ke kahein aap bura na maan jaye......:tauba
love you....:phool:

[shakeeel]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

wow.......beeeeeeeeeautifull

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

Beautiful .....:thmbup:

[*Rida*]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

Thankssssss....:)
hume laga ke kahein aap bura na maan jaye......:tauba
love you....:phool:

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

aray Ummid dear aisa sochna bhi nahin keh tanqeed ka bura lagay gaa.....

main yeh sab aik soch kay tehet kar rahi hoon.....balkay karnay ki koshish kar rahi hoon
Pegham ko apna ghar samajh kar is kay liye decoration piece lati hoon.. agar kabhi kuch pasand na aaye tu is ghar kay dosray afraad ko haq hai keh woh tanqeed karain....

thanks love u too:phool:

[*Rida*]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

wow.......beeeeeeeeeautifull

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

thanks

really aap ka husn-e nazar kay hi baat hai...:blush:
kabhi tanqeed bhi kar diya karain

[shakeeel]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

thanks

really aap ka husn-e nazar kay hi baat hai...:blush:
kabhi tanqeed bhi kar diya karain

Aap ki composing ka ek munfrid style hei, aur aap mehnat bhi khoob karti hain. mein ne aaj tak kabhi bhi aap ki urdu mein koi mistake nahin dekhi.
to jab bhi mein kuch kami ya ghalti dekhun ga tanqeed zaroor karun ga, bila wajah tanqeed se kam karne wala confuse ho jata hai.
han next time aap ke design ko khas tor par is nazar se dekhun ga ka kahan improvment ki gunjaesh hai. Khush raihye.

[*Rida*]

Re: *Aaj ka shair 21/04/2006*

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht shukriyaaaaaaa