Yeh dastaa'n sar mehfil suna nahi sakti .......

[thefire1]

Re: Yeh dastaa'n sar mehfil suna nahi sakti .......

Walaikum Assalaam WR WB

Bohat khoob Hala Jee, shayer nay tou apna kaam lafzoon say kardiya, iss shayeri ka jo rang aap nay dikhaya hay woh shayed shaeri paRh kar itna asaani say samajh nahin aata, bohat khooob, musawarri dekh kar khoon-e-dil say likhay huway lafz nashtar ki tarah dil per waar kar rahay hain, aur dil andar hi andar sulag raha hay.... THANK YOU for creating such a wonderful work of art, keep sharing, khush rahyeh

Asalam o Alikum WR WB

[*Hala*]

Re: Yeh dastaa'n sar mehfil suna nahi sakti .......

thanko so much Fire ji.. from ur ever precious commentz.
be happy

[Mani16]

Re: Yeh dastaa'n sar mehfil suna nahi sakti .......

great poetry Hala Sissssssss,
Veary Beautifulllll Poetry or design Bhi kamal + kamal hy
Agar Poetry k andaz se dekh jaye to apne I Think Text dark Rekh dia hy,
agar lite hota tu achha lagta,
Wese jo cheez aapne show kerna chahi hy wo Bilkul Perfectly show hui hy,
Haqeeqat-o-alfaz or design ka boht achha combination kia hy aapne Rep' kabool karen

[*Hala*]

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thanko so much Mani bro...pasand karni ki lye..
hmmm.. ji mein ni be first try pe text light raki thi.... mujhy kuch khas nhi laga..
per jab yeah color effect dia.. to yeh kuch behtar laga. :)
khush rahien.

[crystal_thinking]

Re: Yeh dastaa'n sar mehfil suna nahi sakti .......

designing is mind blowing hala... poem and images are heartache ... ALLAH BLESS ALL OF US...

[*Hala*]

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thanko so much dear crystel siso

[Sky angel]

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aaaaaaaaaaaaaan img show ni ho ri

[*Hala*]

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aaaaaaaaaaaaaan img show ni ho ri

ab dekhi :comfort:

[AASHNA]

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boht ghazab ki choice hai jee.................

[*Hala*]

Re: Yeh dastaa'n sar mehfil suna nahi sakti .......

thanko Aashna ji