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Re: Saza (By:Naz) .................................
wah....kia zabardast image hai..buht khooob...:)
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Re: Saza (By:Naz) .................................
Bohat hi achi shaeeri ka intikhaab aur image bhi baRa hi dilkash, sahil per baithi iss laRki ki ankhoon main aik ghuroor hay, aik aisi chamak hay jaisay usay nadamaat ka ehsaas na ho aur ussi ki ankhoon ki kahani bayan kartay huay shaaeri kay almaaz.. bohat khoob nibhaya hay aap nay husn-e-lafz aur husn-e-tasweer! agar alfaz na bhi paRhain tou yeh kehna mushkil na hooga kay inn ankhoon ki sharatain kia bayan karna cha rahain hain... Issi tarhan apnay hunr say humain mustafeed karain!sigpic
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Re: Saza (By:Naz) .................................
Originally posted by thefire1 View PostBohat hi achi shaeeri ka intikhaab aur image bhi baRa hi dilkash, sahil per baithi iss laRki ki ankhoon main aik ghuroor hay, aik aisi chamak hay jaisay usay nadamaat ka ehsaas na ho aur ussi ki ankhoon ki kahani bayan kartay huay shaaeri kay almaaz.. bohat khoob nibhaya hay aap nay husn-e-lafz aur husn-e-tasweer! agar alfaz na bhi paRhain tou yeh kehna mushkil na hooga kay inn ankhoon ki sharatain kia bayan karna cha rahain hain... Issi tarhan apnay hunr say humain mustafeed karain!
or poetry + image ka overall bayaan karna ka tareeqa buht acha hai ...
khush raheinu can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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