Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

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:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

nice one anchal

[*Rida*]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

Asslaam-0-Alaikom:rose

so nicee Aachal :phool:

[Yaaram]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

Bohat umdah :rose

[ummid]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

:phool:

[jugnoo217]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

mujhe abhi takk ye sammajh nahi ayee k is type k jitne bhi image aa rahay hain un mein kisi mein bhi text balance mein nahi hai, i mean text ko image k center mein hona chahye jo k nahi hai, jese iss image mein pegham aur poet name k beach kafi gap hai jab k text top par image se out ho kar border line ko touch kar raha hai, agar ghazal ko thora neechay drage kar lya jata tu dekhne mein balance lagtee, hope u will not repeat again, n dond mind, i always try to give u people some suggessions

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Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

mujhe abhi takk ye sammajh nahi ayee k is type k jitne bhi image aa rahay hain un mein kisi mein bhi text balance mein nahi hai, i mean text ko image k center mein hona chahye jo k nahi hai, jese iss image mein pegham aur poet name k beach kafi gap hai jab k text top par image se out ho kar border line ko touch kar raha hai, agar ghazal ko thora neechay drage kar lya jata tu dekhne mein balance lagtee, hope u will not repeat again, n dond mind, i always try to give u people some suggessions

yeh pehlay ki hai ab image side ya oper neachay kar daiti houn :D

[Wafa]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

bohot khoob Aanchal.....:rose

[fari]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

ya zaroort bhi bahmi c ha!!!!!

Bohat khoob
App ki gazal ka inthak bohat acha ha:rose

[Khushi]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

:clap: :clap: zaberdast

dafan ker dou k hum ko sans aaye...:clap: :clap:

[jugnoo217]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

yeh pehlay ki hai ab image side ya oper neachay kar daiti houn :D

ok.................... koi baat nahi :comfort:

[ADNAN.S]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

salaam aanchal g...nice.... per eik ghalt b hai aur eik sher kam b hai..ghalti yeh hai k line-3 " dafun ker do hamein k saans aay" aay ki jagha miley hai... "dafun ker do k hamein saans miley"
aur eik sher jo aap ne nahin likha vo yeh hai.....
" koi rishta nahin raha phir b
ik tasleem lazmi si hai"

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Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

salaam aanchal g...nice.... per eik ghalt b hai aur eik sher kam b hai..ghalti yeh hai k line-3 " dafun ker do hamein k saans aay" aay ki jagha miley hai... "dafun ker do k hamein saans miley"
aur eik sher jo aap ne nahin likha vo yeh hai.....
" koi rishta nahin raha phir b
ik tasleem lazmi si hai"

acha ? mery paas to aisay hi the :mm:
aap humaye send kar dejey mukamal ghazal ham pher bana daian gay :lpop:

[silentocean]

Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

hi anchallazmi to nahin k ammi ko doorion say khatam kai jaye,,,raastay alag ker liye jayein yeh to aisay bhi khatam ho sakti hi...lekin app ka peghamm kafi acha tha :)
take care
ALLAH HAFIZ

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Re: Aaj pher aap ki kami si hai ...

hi anchallazmi to nahin k ammi ko doorion say khatam kai jaye,,,raastay alag ker liye jayein yeh to aisay bhi khatam ho sakti hi...lekin app ka peghamm kafi acha tha :)
take care
ALLAH HAFIZ

yeh poem mere likhi hovi nahi hai :hehe:

shukria ji aap ko pegham pasand aya ...atay rehaye or apni achii achi postings hamaray sath share kartay rehaye :rose