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kabhi yaad aay tu ... MY FAV ..
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Re: kabhi yaad aay tu ... MY FAV ..
Naz i like it. Poetry achhi hai aap ki mehnat bhi nazar aa rahi hai. Abhi hunuuz mashq karna zaroori hai - imla mein thorri garr barr hai - zara zaal sey likha karein. Nahin bhi drust nahin.
Good work :)tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lagey
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Re: kabhi yaad aay tu ... MY FAV ..
buht khobsorat kaam hai .. aur poem buht piyaari hai
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