Meri khamoshi.....jam1

[jam1]

Sallam.

hope u guys like it.............!

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

wah bahot khoob janab
ye Nazam nahi Ghazal hai dear

[thefire1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

Walaikum Assalaam...

design no doubt bohat hi khoobsurat hay....back ground per udaas modern laRkay ka image, background main ghera sumayee color aur beige color ki frame aur uss ka design sab hi bohat khoobsurat hay..... shaaeri kay alfaaz bohat hi khoobsurat hain aur aap ka message bhi clear hay magar lafzoon ki tarteeb aur shaaeree main wazan kuch kam lag raha hay.... aur kuch samajh nahi aaraha kay issay kia kahain, nazm, ghazal, ya phir geet..... iss tehreer main kuch behtri ki zaroorat hay.... keep sharing... khush rahyeh :)

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

wah bahot khoob janab
ye Nazam nahi Ghazal hai dear

thank u bhai ji
acha mujhe pata nahi tha
sorry :donno:
khush rahiye hamesha :salam: :rose

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

Walaikum Assalaam...

design no doubt bohat hi khoobsurat hay....back ground per udaas modern laRkay ka image, background main ghera sumayee color aur beige color ki frame aur uss ka design sab hi bohat khoobsurat hay..... shaaeri kay alfaaz bohat hi khoobsurat hain aur aap ka message bhi clear hay magar lafzoon ki tarteeb aur shaaeree main wazan kuch kam lag raha hay.... aur kuch samajh nahi aaraha kay issay kia kahain, nazm, ghazal, ya phir geet..... iss tehreer main kuch behtri ki zaroorat hay.... keep sharing... khush rahyeh :)

bohat shukriya bhai ji apki honsla afzai ka
waise apas ki baat hai mujhe b nahi pata tha k ye nazam hai ya ghazal
khair koi baat nahi next time apki tips yaad rakhoon ga INSHALLAH aur kuch aisa le ker aoon ga jo apko is se b ziyada pasand aye :phool: :insha:
khush rahiye :salam: :rose

[*Hala*]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

w.salam
superb and awesome work.

[msalmanayaz]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

Aray.............zabardast
Nice Sharing dear.........
Keep shairing with us.
From
M.Salman Aya

[thefire1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

bohat shukriya bhai ji apki honsla afzai ka
waise apas ki baat hai mujhe b nahi pata tha k ye nazam hai ya ghazal
khair koi baat nahi next time apki tips yaad rakhoon ga INSHALLAH aur kuch aisa le ker aoon ga jo apko is se b ziyada pasand aye :phool: :insha:
khush rahiye :salam: :rose

Yehi tou sachayi hay aap ki jo dil ko cho jaati hay khush rahyeh :rose

[*Rida*]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

apna aik alag aik andaaz hai jo buht khobsorat hai ....:em:

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

w.salam
superb and awesome work.

bohat shukriya Hala ji
khush rahiye.............!:salam: :rose

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

Aray.............zabardast
Nice Sharing dear.........
Keep shairing with us.
From
M.Salman Aya

bohat shukriya dear ji
khush rahiye.........!:salam: :rose

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

Yehi tou sachayi hay aap ki jo dil ko cho jaati hay khush rahyeh :rose

:shyy: ............... :rose

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

apna aik alag aik andaaz hai jo buht khobsorat hai ....:em:

bohat shukriya Rida ji honsla afzai ka
khush rahiye hamesha........! :salam: :rose

[life.]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

v nice..................

[jam1]

Re: Meri khamoshi.....jam1

v nice..................

bohat shukriya dear
khush rahiye..........!